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The Book Charmer by Karen Hawkins Dove Pond North Carolina

January 29, 2020 by Kathy Leave a Comment

After binge reading Betty Neels’ sweet and simple English romances, I was glad to get into The Book Charmer by Karen Hawkins. Yes, there is a hint of romance, but the love is for family, for place, for friends.

Dove Pond, a small town in North Carolina, is home to the Dove family, the Phelps family, the Parker family. We begin when Grace moves to Dove Pond with her foster mom, Mama G, and her orphaned niece Daisy. Grace has out-worked everyone to reach financial security in Charlotte, and comes home to take care of her mom and niece when she realizes Mama G has dementia and Daisy’s mom dies of an overdose.

Grace always does her duty and does it very, very well, lets nothing or anyone stop her from reaching the aim she has set for herself. Sadly, there is no happy ending possible for Mama G. Grace grieves for her mom.

Sarah Dove loves her town and knows it is dying as businesses and families move out, tax base shrinks and people become apathetic and fatalistic. Books talk to Sarah and an old journal written by her ancestor over 200 years earlier warns Sarah the town will die unless she or someone with her saves it. Sarah sees cats’ behavior and flowers changing color as predicting that Grace is in fact to be the town savior.

Grace wants nothing to do with Sarah at first; Grace is the new town clerk and wants to do her work, do it well for a year, then go back to Charlotte. Presumably Mama G will be better or dead by then.

The Book Charmer is the story of friendship. How will Sarah convince Grace to help? How will Grace shrug off her wariness and remove the barriers she constructed to avoid friends and close relationships? How will Grace work with the myriad other Dove Pond characters to save the town?

Karen Hawkins charms us with the lively characters. Aside from Sarah and Grace, Mama G, Daisey, the cat Killer/Theo and hot neighbor Trav, Karen Hawkins introduces caregiver Linda, banker Zoe, realtor Kat, tea-maker Ava, pet store owner Ed, the other members of Dove Pond Social Club who turn the town’s Apple Festival into a giant success, a business outreach/family fun time/recruitment drive.

I enjoyed The Book Charmer and its cast of people with their quirks and problems and will look for other novels set in Dove Pond. Please note this novel is unlike many of Karen Hawkins romances and has no explicit sex.

4 Stars

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Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Dementia, Dove Pond, Families, Friendship, Karen Hawkins

Friends at Thrush Green – Gentle English Country Town Novel by Miss Read

February 7, 2018 by Kathy Leave a Comment

If you get tired of novels about married angst, or alien invasions, or children misbehaving, then try Miss Read’s novels set in small English villages.  Her people enjoy life; they meet problems and forge through, always with neighbors and friends along to help (or gossip).

I enjoy Miss Read’s novels.  I like to read about people whom I would like to know in person, and people who embody the best of human nature, generally good but imperfect, with failings large and small.  I like that there is little or no profanity, no vulgarity, no smut, no blasphemy.  The characters attend church, grocery shop, help out a neighbor, clean the house, enjoy life as it comes.

The characters in Friends at Thrush Green confront serious problems.  Elderly Bertha Lovelocks is senile and has taken to thieving, driving her gentle sister nearly to tears.  Margaret Lester is an alcoholic.  Percy needs a wife and several young ladies need to get married suddenly.  Friends come together to help.

The setting is enjoyable.  We are in a tiny village where not everyone has a telephone.  No cell phones or internet mar the peace and the biggest hobby is gardening.  This is a peaceful novel about life in a quiet English village.

I think this novel may be easier to read in print format.  If you want to look up a given character (is he the minister or the retired doctor??) it is much easier to flip back in a print book.

4 Stars

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: 4 Stars Pretty Good, Book Review, Contemporary

Review: That Thing Around Your Neck – Short Stories by Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie

January 17, 2017 by Kathy Leave a Comment

The first story in this collection, “Cell One”, is set solely in Nigeria, time not given but likely in the last 20 years.  I read this as part of December’s A Season of Stories and it is unforgettable.

As in most of the other stories, Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie tells Cell One through the eyes of a young woman, sister to trouble-making Nnamabia, the brother her parents favor and cosset.  Both young people attend a Nigerian university that is frequently beset by violence as cults (gangs) of young men attack each other, often resulting in murder.  The police arrest and jail Nnamabia after a fatal attack and his sister and parents visit him in jail every day via a 2 hour drive.

“Cell One” reaches its emotional height by how matter of fact the sister narrates the events, from shake downs by the highway police to shake downs and bribes in the jail to the endless beatings and humiliation.  The brother tries to spare the life and dignity of an older man who is imprisoned because the authorities cannot find his son; the guards beat this older man daily and the brother risks his own life to try and stop it. We do not know what happens after, whether the brother grows up after this or slides back to being the favored child who gets away with stealing from his own mother.

That Thing Around Your Neck includes several stories set in both America and Nigeria.  One of my favorites is “Imitation”, about a Nigerian wife, Nkem, whose husband is a Big Man back home.  He moved her and their children to America while he spends 50 weeks a year back home.  When the wife discovers he is bringing his mistress to their home in Lagos she decides to move everyone back to Nigeria, standing up to her husband for the first time ever.  I enjoyed the character Nkem and her combination of realistic expectations (of course her husband strays) with determination to have a real marriage and family life.

Several stories showed how both Americans and Nigerians may have nutty ideas about each other, making overly sweeping generalizations about behavior and culture.  One example was “Jumping Monkey Hill” where Edward, the literature seminar leader gently refuses to believe one author’s work is truly African, stating “how African is it for a person to tell her family that she is homosexual?”.  In “The Arrangers of Marriage” the new husband seeks a lighter-skinned Nigerian wife, then has her use only her middle name, Agatha, and tries to turn her into an American, cooking American food, speaking American English.

Many of Adichie’s characters are away from home, are lonely, horribly lonely even when surrounded by people or married.  The stories are good because we connect with the people.  Adichie uses the short story form well, focusing on people’s feelings, their fears and longing, telling stories with small plots and big characters.

5 Stars

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Dealing with the Apocalypse – A Christian Novel of Love and Joy

September 15, 2016 by Kathy 1 Comment

Author Robert Lampros offered his novel, Last Year’s Resolution, to interested readers through Goodreads.  I was pleased to get a complimentary copy, paperback and not an e-book, from him and am glad to review it.

Lamrpos asks the question, What would happen to a normal, happy, successful person when the Apocalypse happens?”  By the way, this is the real Apocalypse as foretold in Revelations, not the usual end-of-the-world-as-we-know-it that is a staple in science fiction and fantasy.  Lampros does not go down the rabbit hole of the rapture, which some Protestants expect as the first step when believers are swept up to heaven before the world falls apart for several year under Satan’s rule.  Instead Lampros postulates that most people survive, go on living their lives as much like usual; through the plagues, earthquakes, even the Beast.

Edmund Stovender is the lead character, a successful young author.  He has faith but isn’t immersed in it, God is part of his life but not a big part.  He meets Marie when she asks him for an interview and something about her questions and her voice intrigues him.  They fall in love.  Their lives together begin only after the first step of the Apocalypse, a testament to faith and love.  They marry and have a child, move to a small town in Iowa.

Edmund’s agent, Salem, is the typical unsure adult who doesn’t think about God and rarely prays but he find himself reaching for half-remembered prayers when the sky bursts into flames.  Like many he survives the initial onslaught and continues through his normal career, albeit with a fresher appreciation of Scripture and God.

I liked the book’s focus on normal life and how one can testify best by the small things, by living one’s life as a faithful Christian while working, falling in love, raising a family, making a living, being in the world but not of the world.  Edmund and Salem were believable, interesting people.  Marie was a little less complete.  None of the characters were cardboard cutouts.

There were a few places in Last Year’s Resolution where Lampros intimated things weren’t all that rosy around Edmund.  The American Association of Ethical Arts, Sciences and Practices shuts down Edmund’s last play and tries to jail him for the crime of Artistic Endangerment.  The AAEASP feels his very successful play “threatens the safety and well-being …(or) affronts the consciences and moral integrity of the populace.”  I would have liked to know more about this group and its influence on American law and how we got to censorship.  Was the AAEASP in the pocket of the Beast?

Likewise the President acknowledges that events are following those in Revelations.  We don’t see any mention of him being impeached or threatened which one would expect if it is a crime to offer an inspiring play in a public theater.

Overall the book was solid.  It is short, not much more than an hour’s read, but I expect the ideas and themes to linger much longer.

4 Stars

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Christian

Wheat That Springeth Green by J F Powers – A Priest’s Life and Growth

June 26, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

I read Wheat That Springeth Green by J F Powers several years ago and the characters stuck in my mind like a song that you hear every now and then and each time stop to listen.

The novel follows Joe Hackett through his youthful sympathy for older priest Father Day, to his teenaged sexual encounters with the girl and maid next door (complete with syphilis) through the seminary with his pig-headed pursuit of his image of God, to his work as the Catholic pastor in Ingenook.

Along the way Joe struggles to live a life of virtue, to help others reach sanctity, to be a good man and a good priest.  He tries a hair shirt and hours on his knees in the seminary but is never able to achieve the immediate and obvious union with God that he seeks.  He fights disillusionment and an ever-growing beer belly, parishioners’ stinginess and the constant battle between holiness and worldliness.

Writing Style

J. F. Powers combined stream-of-conscious with modest narrative, all from Joe’s point of view, and abrupt changes of scenery and time.  The book would be a little easier to follow with a bit more narrative.  For example, Joe finally gets assigned as a pastor to his own parish, but we have to surmise that by the change in tone and topic in a new chapter.

The stream-of-conscious thoughts are Joe wrestling with a problem, neatly listing the pros and cons, and sometimes the dialogue he wants to have but cannot.  The archbishop increases the assessment against his parish, but Joe feels bound to not make money requests to his parish.  He implemented a flat fee concept with the promise that he wouldn’t ask for extra funds.

Joe imagines discussing this with the Arch, all with a happy ending.  Instead he and his assistant divide up the DPs (deliquent parishioners who don’t give) and visit some each evening to ask the families to live up to their stewardship responsibilities.  (We can imagine how well that works.  On average in any parish a third give regularly, a third give once in a while and a third never give.)

Characters

Joe is inherently kind and thoughtful, not what one would expect reading his famous question posed in seminary “How do we make virtue as attractive as sex?”  As a boy Joe sees his pastor, “Dollar Bill” treat his assistant Father Day rudely and be greedy with his parish.  As an adult Joe seeks out Father Day, makes him his confessor, treats him kindly and with great respect.

The most striking example was with Catfish Tooney, sorry, Monsignor Tooney, Joe’s former classmate and general pain in the neck in the diocesan chancery.  Joe built a nice rectory in his parish and wants the archbishop to bless it, but must go through Tooney who of course says no.  Later the archbishop asks Joe in person why he hasn’t had him out to bless the rectory and Joe bites his tongue and struggles for days to find a way to answer without calling out Tooney.  Most of us wouldn’t bother protecting a guy who’s been a jerk for years.

Humor with Seriousness

Wheat that Springeth Green is funny even while treating serious topics like God, faith, virtue, money, sex and dreams.  Joe has a good sense of humor and Powers does a good job showing us the funny moments, both inside and outside of Joe’s head.  We see Joe evolve from a precocious youngster to an obnoxiously self-important seminarian to an earnest priest dedicated to his own holiness and hopefully that of the people he serves, to a priest who compromises with the world to one who re-ignites his own faith.  Along the way we smile and maybe even laugh a bit at life.

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Contemporary, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Dear Committee Members – Life Via Letters of Recommendation By Julie Schumacher

June 14, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Have you ever asked someone to write a letter of recommendation?  Maybe a favorite teacher or neighbor when you wanted a job or a scholarship?  Have you ever wondered just what they said about you?

Wonder no more.  Instead read Dear Committee Members by Julie Schumacher.  The author tells the story of Jay Fitger, Professor of English at a small college in his own words, via letters of recommendation, complaints to the HR department, emails to his ex-wife and ex-girlfriend, letters to friends.

Professor Fitger has much to complain about.  His English department faces severe budget cuts, whacking the English graduate program, living in 3rd rate offices, with a department head borrowed from Sociology.  Fitger wants his current students to survive and thrive and worries about one in particular, Darren Browles.

Mr. Browles wrote a novel, or at least part of a novel, we aren’t really sure.  Although Browles never appears in the book, Fitger writes letter after letter – to his former friends, his ex-wife, his publisher, his agent – in short anyone he can think of who might bring this pseudo-masterpiece to print, or if nothing else, provide Browles with a few bucks.

Meanwhile Fitger’s other students are moving into corporate jobs or temporary work at liquor stores and trailer parks, going on to grad school, selling novels.  We see them all.  Only Browles remains, left behind, unwanted.

 

Characterization

Professor Fitger is the star of course and we learn much about him.  He’s in his mid/late 40s, balding, a bit fussy, a bit bitter, sarcastic, with distant memories of being just a bit more radical, a bit more successful.  He’s also lonely and prone to sabotage himself and any relationships.

He writes his letters with as much honesty and kindness as the student deserves.  One girl was desperate for a letter and her advisor was gone so she turned to Fitger whom she had seen around campus – after all he was in the building and almost no one else was.  Fitger wrote a charming letter, praising the student’s enterprise and determination while accurately describing how he was roped into writing the recommendation.

The book is full of funny comments like these, interspersed with heartfelt pleas to help Browles and to his ex-wife and girlfriend to please like him again.  We don’t see Fitger in his home, only his office, while he reminiscenses about his mistakes, how he included too much reality in his one successful novel, so much that his wife could not tell what parts were fiction and dumped him.  He remains on good terms with people right until he can’t help but do something to sabotage the friendship, for example, copying the entire university staff on an email to his girlfriend.

The setting is mostly inside Fitger’s mind with sharp descriptions of the falling-down academic building with its non-working plumbing.  We get a glimpse of cutthroat academic life where all new hires are non-tenure track adjuncts who live on air, pennies and dreams.  Fitger remembers it didn’t use to be like that and it drives him to write scathing letters to the dean.

I think I would like Fitger in small doses, preferably with a glass of wine.

Summary

Dear Committee Members is funny, poignant.  I recommend it to you without reservation!

5 Stars

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Maeve Binchy A Week In Winter – Meet Interesting People

April 29, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Maeve Binchy died shortly after finishing A Week In Winter, a series of character vignettes connected by a holiday week in a refurbished house on the west coast of Ireland.  We follow the hotel’s owner, her employees, and the guests who come for her opening week.

Owner Chicky Starr starts the novel.  She is the girl who fell in love foolishly and followed her guy to New York where he eventually dumped her.  Chicky was determined to not crawl home – her family was horrified that she left to live with a man without marriage – and made a life for herself in New York.  In fact Chicky made two lives, one the real situation, a pastry chef and boardinghouse worker, and the other her fantasy life full of love with her husband Walter (the guy who dumped her) and their fun on the town.  Eventually she goes back home to Stoneybridge, buys the Stone House from Miss Sheedy and sets out to make it as a hotelier.

Chicky is determined, interested in people without wanting to pry or volunteer advice, hard working, careful with money.  She is living a lie, having told everyone that “husband Walter” died in a car accident, but it doesn’t seem to bother her.  It’s as though she managed to disconnect herself from the years in America and build something brand new, albeit on a shaky foundation.

Mrs. Binchly does a grand job letting us see the people behind the names.  We read about their friends and backgrounds, the people they loved and those they disappointed.  The guests range from an American movie star to an icy school mistress to a married couple that makes their days bright by winning contests.

The Walls won their week as second prize in contest where first prize was a week in Paris.  They spent the time before the trip and the first day or so lamenting their lost Paris week.  They didn’t feel like enjoying their week until they learned the first prize winners were having a miserable week, with none of the promised Parisian delights and an unpleasant stay in a 3rd rate room in the prize hotel.  Then they decided they won a worthy prize, relaxed and enjoyed Stone House.

The author’s genius was in making the people come to life with a series of small, gentle stories that show them both for good and ill.  Some of the characters have dubious moral backgrounds, but all are shown in a kind, warm-hearted light.  In fact the only character shown with no redeeming qualities is the school mistress, who is so self-closed that we never get beyond her rigor.

Overall I enjoyed this.  A A Week In Winter was easy to pick up late in the evening and read about a person or two, then put down until the next evening.  There wasn’t a lot of plot or action among the characters as the action occurred mostly before or after the week’s holiday.  Each character, except Miss Nell Howe, uses the week to come to peace with a situation or to make a life-turning decision.   The book was peaceful and interesting.

4 Stars

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Contemporary

Home by Matt Dunn, Book Review

November 7, 2015 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Home, by Matt Dunn, is one of those perfectly decent books that just misses.  This may be me and my tastes instead of the book itself as I was unable to get past the first couple pages of another book by Mr. Dunn, The Ex-Boyfriend’s Handbook.  I probably wouldn’t have finished Home either, except it came from Net Galley for a review.

There is nothing wrong with Home.  The writing is decent, main characters are well-done, setting is interesting, and the plot uses a universal conflict.

The primary story concerns Josh, who left the sad seaside town of Derton at 18 to pursue college and dreams of writing, plus his parents, his best friend, his former and almost-former girlfriends and his old high school nemesis.  Josh’s dad is dying of lung cancer and Josh has left London to come home, fully intending to stay a week or so then return to the bright lights and his advertising job.

While in Derton Josh breaks up with his current girl friend (we all cheer at this point), he loses his job, finds the girl he dumped at 18, realizes he should have stayed with her.  Eventually it works out but the process is a bit tedious.

Josh doesn’t believe in anything except that he doesn’t want to live in Derton.  That has driven him for 18 years, but a desire to flee is not a desire to live, and being against something doesn’t tell you what you are for.  He doesn’t like the superficial glitter that his girlfriend and boss embody (best line in the book describes his girlfriend’s closet as a “shrine to Jimmy Choo”), but he doesn’t know what to replace it with.

Josh stumbles around the emotional minefield of his dad’s illness and death, his fears and loneliness.  It takes him the full novel to do what we readers on page 3 see is the right course.

Overall I’d give this a solid 3 stars but don’t read it if you don’t like books where people are their own worst enemies.

 

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

The Color of Water in July – Nora Carrol

September 19, 2015 by Kathy Leave a Comment

The Color of Water in July is set in Michigan, at the fictional Pine Lake, which is obviously Lake Charlevoix. We have spent many happy days in and around the area so I wanted to enjoy the story. Unfortunately it didn’t hold together for me.

There are several main characters, Jess Carpenter who inherits a lakeside cottage from her grandmother Mamie, Mamie herself who narrates about a third of the book, and Mamie’s sister Lila.  The story revolves around events in 1922 when Lila dies swimming across the lake and Mamie ends up with an illegitimate child, Jess’s mother Margaret.

Jess comes back to Michigan to sell the cottage when Mamie dies and brings her boyfriend Russ.  I could not find anything to grab onto with Jess.  She doesn’t love Russ but she lets him talk her into selling; she doesn’t want the cottage but she remembers wonderful times there; she wanted to be a doctor to help people but ended up a research librarian.  She didn’t have much personality.

Mamie had a strong personality but the pivotal event, her claiming Margaret as her own child made no sense whatsoever.  Margaret was really Lila’s child, abandoned in the woods.  In 1922 there would have been little shame for Mamie to identify Margaret as Lila’s, as Lila was married, and even Lila abandoning the baby could have been brushed off, especially once Lila died.

Mamie’s decision cost her fiance and eventually cost Jess the love she had for Daniel and (another) illegitimate child.  Do you see the plot complexities here?

The timeline was very difficult to follow.

1922  Margaret is born
Sometime between 1940 and 1965 Jess is born
18 years later Jess meets Daniel, gets pregnant, learns Daniel is her first cousin (supposedly) and loses one baby to miscarriage and the other to abortion.
15 years after this Jess is now 33 and comes back to Michigan to sell the cottage.

As near as I can figure, Jess would have been 33 sometime in the mid 1980s, yet the book mentions Russ using the internet, which was not exactly the internet we know today.  (Remember Compushare and AOL anyone?  That’s what we had in the mid 1980s.)

The setting in one of my favorite Michigan places was the best part of the novel.  It was interesting seeing the evolution of the exclusive lake association (basically like a homeowners’ association except with servants), and the surrounding towns and trying to match real with fictional places.

Other than the fun Michigan locale, this book left me lukewarm.  I won’t look for more by the author.

I read this courtesy of Net Galley and received the Kindle version for free in exchange for an honest review.  It’s telling that I just deleted the book from my tablet.

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Romance Novels

Down Where My Love Lives, Two Books by Charles Martin, The Dead Don’t Dance and Maggie

August 3, 2015 by Kathy Leave a Comment

First, know that Down Where My Love Lives is a compilation of two novels, The Dead Don’t Dance (Awakening Series #1)
and Maggie (Awakening Series #2). Also The Dead Don’t Dance was the first book Charles Martin published. I read these within a couple weeks of reading Where the River Ends, an excellent novel with many of the same themes.  Unfortunately Down Where My Love Lives felt like the rough draft.

Many reviewers describe Martin’s writings as sentimental, but I don’t agree with that assessment.  Martin includes emotion and he writes about love as the center point and reason for being.  Unfortunately this duology has a big dose of melodrama, but it is still good enough to be an enjoyable read.

The Dead Don’t Dance Book 1

The Dead Don’t Dance starts out with Dylan and Maggie, married for just a couple of years, expecting their first child.  Maggie seems compulsive, unrealistic and controlling, and Dylan’s devotion to her was puzzling.  She sure wouldn’t be my first choice of a spouse.

Dylan farms a large plot in South Carolina that he inherited from his grandparents, but they live on only $20,000 a year. Maggie spent several hundred on nice-but-not-essential baby things at the local baby store, far more than Dylan could afford, and freaked out when she found a black hair growing on her chin.

Their son is stillborn and Maggie hemorrhages and goes into a coma.  The novel alternates flashbacks to Dylan’s life before and with Maggie with his response to her long coma.  In the meantime Dylan starts a new job teaching English at the community college (which Maggie applied for unbeknownst to Dylan), delivers Amanda’s baby in the freezing rain, tries to make friends with Maggie’s pet pig Pinky, and tends Maggie every day.  He lets his farm go and loses his crop.

Throughout we see Dylan through his thoughts and actions and how others respond to him.  He is deeply committed to his wife, overall kind and thoughtful, caring, not terribly interested in money or worldly success.  He’s the type of guy you want to know and be friends with.

The exception was the episode that seemed completely pointless, cruel and had no place in the book, the raccoon hunt.  Raccoons can be vicious and pests in a city but the hunters went into a wild swamp to hunt the coons.  The raccoon in the swamp was surely no threat or pest.  Martin describes how Amos shot the coon – deliberately NOT killing it – so that it fell down through many feet of branches to get attacked and and eaten while alive by the coon dogs.   I don’t have a problem with hunting animals you plan to eat or to remove pests like the bazillion rabbits in our area, but first why would they hunt a wild raccoon they don’t plan to eat and second, why deliberately be that cruel?  And what was the possible reason to include this in the novel?  It gave no insight to Dylan or his friends except to make me dislike the bunch.

The Dead Don’t Dance was overall mediocre and had I read it before others by Charles Martin I would not have pursued any more of his novels.  It was OK at best.

Maggie

Martin wrote a sequel that picks up 17 months later, after Maggie awakens from her coma.  Dylan experienced serious emotional events while she was in the coma and finds it very hard to tell Maggie about them, partly because he doesn’t want to make her feel even worse than she already does about their stillborn child.  This part of the novel felt authentic to me.

Maggie had an intricate and ridiculous plot, picked up the story of Dylan’s love for Maggie and threw in the complication that Maggie may be unable to carry a child to term.  Oh, and throw in the fact that Dylan’s best friend and across-the-street neighbor married Amanda whose father’s enemies – former partners in crime – are after him and everyone close to him.  That leads to kidnapping Amanda, torching Dylan’s house, killing his dog, assaulting Maggie, burning down the father’s church.

The book is overly complex. Dylan and Maggie need to get acquainted in some sense; Dylan lived 4 months alone, buried their son alone, dealt with a new job alone.  Maggie missed all that and woke up with the fear for her child top of her mind.

Maggie gets pregnant but miscarries and she and Dylan decide to adopt.  However the agency looks askew at their finances, overall life style (truck instead of a mini van) and mostly at Maggie’s emotional health.  Dylan takes steps to become acceptable to them, borrowing $40,000 to finance the adoption, trading in his truck for a van, but Maggie is oblivious to the problems.

Now add the neighbor and best friend, Amos, whose father-in-law gave evidence that put his former partners in prison for years.  Those creeps are violent and want to destroy the father-in-law, his entire family, and for some reason, Dylan too.

The last plot point is about Bryce, a former US marine who is rich but lives in a trailer in a closed drive in movie theater.  Bryce is generous with time and money and likes Dylan and Maggie, and in return they take care of him to the extent he allows it.  The twist in Maggie is that Bryce changed; he is bathed, trailer picked up and repaired, he is back in shape.  Someone from the military comes to advise Bryce’s financial adviser and Dylan to keep away from him, that Bryce could snap.

Just like the first book, Dylan is interesting, someone you want to know.  Maggie seems selfish and controlling.  Amos is a great guy, Amanda too good to be true.  Characters are partially developed, not complete people.

Summary

Charles Martin shows flashes of the good writer he later proves to be.  He writes of the most ghastly places imaginable, swamps, South Carolina farms with swarms of mosquitoes, places where a “cool” evening is 78 degrees, and makes them almost seem desirable.  He emphasizes the heat and mugginess and bugs, that summer last 6 months or more, but you can tell that he loves it.  It’s home.  All of his books are set in these horrible places.

He writes of love, especially the committed love of true marriage, but from the husband’s perspective.  Most romance books are from the wife’s point of view and it is lovely to see a man confessing his love.

He used some similar elements in Maggie as in Where the River Ends.  Both have a sick wife, a disparate couple, committed marriage, no children, icky hot muggy swampy southern setting, lots of emotion.  In fact Martin uses the term “indomitable” to describe both Maggie and Abbie in Where the River Ends.  Martin learned to tidy up his plots and show his characters far better by the time he wrote Where the River Ends.

Overall I’d give this 2 or 3 stars.  A mediocre but tolerable first novel, ragged around the edges and not a good introduction to an excellent author.

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction, Romance Novels

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