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Two New Science Fiction Novels: Prominence by A. C. Hadfield and Fringe Runner by Rachel Aukes

August 3, 2017 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Prominence: A Space Opera Adventure (Blackstar Command Book 1) by A. C. Hadfield.

When I think “space opera” I think of grand vistas and complicated plots, books that are uplifting, showing human endeavor amid deadly danger.   The original Foundation trilogy is perfect example.

Prominence lacks the feel of grandeur.  Instead it feels like YA fiction where things just happen, and teen heroes save the day. For instance, our protagonist, Kai, is able to contact not one but two military leaders – admirals and equivalent – in a war zone, insult one and make demands on the other, and both admirals take his call and listen.  Further the military leadership sends Kai to find his missing father and retrieve a rumored piece of very high tech left behind by the mysterious Navigator aliens.  How realistic is this?

The blurb indicates the Coalition is fighting for its life against the Host, that the Host seeks its annihilation. Yet we learn near the end that both groups include aliens and some humans, that the main difference is the Host values life above all while the Coalition is “more pragmatic”.  That does not jibe with the annihilation bit.

I managed to finish it although the last third was difficult.  Hadfield had a reasonable story in the first third or so, then it got unbelievable and boring.  The characters are stock folks from the shelf.  Pacing and style are OK.

Overall 2 Stars

Fringe Runner (Fringe Series, #1) by Rachel Aukes

Fringe Runner is better than Prominence.  The novel’s main problems are uneven pacing and a thin plot with too many people acting far too gullible.  It wasn’t boring exactly but I never felt connected to the characters and the backstory was far fetched.

The two main planets in the Collective are Alluvia and Myr, both originally colonized by Earth, and a few smaller colonies called the Fringe  Earth allowed Alluvia and Myr their independence immediately but the two did not treat their colonies with the same pragmatic respect..  Alluvia and Myr keep the Fringe worlds and their people in tight control and treat them as little more than cheap forced labor or cannon fodder.

What I kept wondering:  Where is Earth?  If Earth colonized Alluvia and Myr, then it presumably is still around.  Why does Earth have no role or voice in the Collective?  No ambassador, no trade, nothing.  That doesn’t make sense.

Characters were a notch above cardboard but they didn’t feel real to me.  Main character Aramis Reyne should be fun to read about.  He’s older, arthritic, tired of living on the edge of bankruptcy, tired of his former friends think him a traitor.  Somehow I just couldn’t get interested in him.  In the last third of the novel Reyne is extraordinarily gullible, first falling for the old “my friend told me” and then following a complete unknown to a set up ambush.  Nope.  Sorry, but if Reyne is that stupid then he wouldn’t have lived past the earlier uprising.

The backstory was a touch unbelievable too.  Sure, I can see Myr and Alluvia acting like overlords and treating the Fringe like serfs, but I can’t see the Fringe members of the Collective military going along with it, or at least not making some trouble along the way.  The political situation described is too fragile to last as long as it supposedly has.

Writing style was OK.  Dialogue and pacing were problematic but again the biggest issue is sheer lack of compelling interest.  I kept putting the story down and having a hard time remembering who was who and what was happening even just a day later.  I won’t pursue the series.

3 Stars

I received both books for free through Instafreebie

Filed Under: Space and Aliens Tagged With: 3 Stars, Book Review, Science Fiction

Recursion: Book One of the Recursion Event Saga. OK Time Travel Novel

July 6, 2017 by Kathy 1 Comment

Recursion by Brian J Walton starts with a bang as Molly, narrator and main character, slides out of the time travel tunnel into 1950s Paris and a burning hotel.  The tunnel station in 1950s Paris is in a hotel basement and the entire building is on fire.  More, Interlopers – other time travelers from unsanctioned groups – are present and shooting to kill.

I thought this might be one of the time travel series where bad guys are trying to change history and the Time Patrol (or whatever name the author chooses) try to keep history on the straight and narrow.  Books with this time travel plot can be a lot of fun and it’s always interesting to see how the author will spin the inevitable paradoxes.  Will the time travelers even be able to change history?  Will changes spawn new parallel worlds?  Will the resulting paradox cause total collapse?

Unfortunately Walters’ novel started to flag a bit as we got deeper into the story.  I kept waiting for Molly to ask some obvious questions, such as the one prompted by her mentor, Helen’s comment, “that’s what the ISD pretends to do.”  C’mon.  Who wouldn’t follow up on a lead in like that?

The paradoxes were left as paradoxes.  Molly had multiple memory sets of different pasts, married, not married, and the Interlopers were able to change events by having someone and their time traveler duplicate get close.   Walters kept using the phrase “own timeline” to describe going back or forwards in time during one’s own lifetime.

I finished the entire novel but was not intrigued enough to look for its sequels.  Molly as a character didn’t have a lot of depth, although in fairness it is hard to be deep when you are running for your life.  The back story looked interesting but the villain and his almost-magical powers seemed ridiculous.  If I were the bad guy in this story I’d be doing a lot different things than chasing Molly to find out what her Dad was up to.  The bad guy was cardboard, a stock villain character.

The writing was uneven.  The last third of the novel seemed disjointed and didn’t make a lot of sense while the first third was good.

Overall I’d give this 3 stars.  Keep in mind Walters is a fairly new author and may improve in future books.

I received a free copy via Instafreebie and the links here are referral links to Amazon.

Filed Under: Near Future Tagged With: 3 Stars, Book Review, Science Fiction, Time Travel

Mini Reviews: Five Fantasy and Science Fiction Novellas to Miss

July 2, 2017 by Kathy Leave a Comment

These short reviews cover books that I want to remember not to try again.  Several were free from Instafreebie, meaning the authors are likely new and may improve in their later books.

A Magical Reckoning: Magic and Mischief Book 1

This is a set of 6 novellas about supernatural betrayal.  I only got partway through the first story because the back story is all about people who have [insert animal here] genes and thus have [insert favorite power] here.  The lead character has skunk genes that give her fatty glands in her back that secrete thiol, which can be either really really good stuff or not.  Unscrupulous evil people are dragooning skunk/people and forcibly draining their thiol.

Can we say “yuck”?

The writing wasn’t too bad.  N. R. Hariston, the author had a big backstory to tell and crammed as much as she could in the first few pages.  We know about the skunks, the evil dragoons, the dragon/people, the fact our lead is in some vigilante or police force.  What we don’t have is a reason to care about the character.  I decided supernatural betrayal is probably not a good sub-sub genre to pursue.

Warning!  Do Not Read this Story

Somehow I managed to finish this longish short story by Robert Jeschonek but it was a close one.  It isn’t very good.

Moon Men:  A Science Fiction Comedy

Author Chris Lowry describes this as extremely funny.  Not particularly.  It’s science fiction, sort of, given the aliens want to talk to our hero on the moon and he’s having a hard time getting there.  On the other hand, you can’t just point a rocket at the moon and expect to get exactly where you need to be.
I did finish it, mostly because I wanted to see what the aliens had to say but the story ended before our hero actually arrives.

Xander  An Incandescent Short Story

I didn’t get past the first page.  Main character is a teen boy with hormone issues.

Complicated Blue:  The Extraordinary Adventures of the Good Witch Anais Blue

This was boring and I quit almost immediately.
I don’t recommend any of these.

Filed Under: Near Future Tagged With: Book Review, Fantasy, Not So Good, Science Fiction

Review: Under New Leadership – Intriguing Novella about an IRS Agent (Really)

March 31, 2017 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Writing coaches and English teachers all say to write what you know about.  New author Shawn Robert Smith is an accountant so he wrote about…yes, an IRS agent on jury duty.  If this sounds weird for a science fiction plot, then know his short story, Under New Leadership, works.

Smith built an intriguing back story that makes me want to learn more.  Why are there 10 new alien species all in the United States?  How come one (or more) are IRS agents?  How does that work?  I’m trying to visualize people from really far away and really strange backgrounds learning double entry bookkeeping, auditing, and taxation and coming up a bit short.

I took accounting classes years ago (so as to pass the CPA exam just in case I needed a career change) and can say that one must put a different hat on in order to think in accountant-ese.  Accountants measure stuff and record stuff and the biggest conflicts are on how to do it, not whether the thing being measured is worth doing in the first place.  Now we’ve aliens who fled to Earth and the US’s welcome worrying whether to double discount depreciation?  This is one new back story and it’s lots of fun.

Main character Jrulnik is blessed with super hearing and discovers a plot by criminal masterminds to pool their efforts for greater profit and less bloodshed.  He shows up for jury duty but gets bundled into a closet while the supposed jurors agree on new leadership for their cabal before freeing Jrulnik and blithely finding the defendant guilty.  All the way through Jrulnik wants to be a good citizen, worries about maintaining the honor of the IRS by performing his juror role with care.

We have lots of mysteries.  Who is the girl with purple eyes really?  Where did she come from?  How did we get 10 alien species all fleeing to Earth?  What are they fleeing from and did anyone nefarious follow them?  And last, how did the IRS survive and thrive in a world with aliens?  (Or is that another way of saying that death and taxes will be with us always?)

Such a simple plot.  And so much back story!  I look forward to reading the novels Smith will write set in this same world. Right now this story is free on Amazon and I recommend it.

4+ Stars

Filed Under: Near Future Tagged With: Book Review, Humor, Science Fiction

More Instafreebie Mini Reviews: Zero Flux and Soldier of Charity

March 17, 2017 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Recently I got several dozen science fiction and fantasy novels for free from Instafreebie.  Getting the books meant getting their authors’ newsletters too.  I unsubscribed immediately from newsletters that were all fluff, or talked about angels, demons, shape shifters, mermaids, steampunk, vampires, werewolves, alpha mates, alien romances or featured bare chested men or barely dressed women, were aimed at YA audiences or were incoherent; no point in wasting the writers’ email quotas or my time.  I’ve been going through the rest and reading the books which have interesting titles or covers (yes, it is hard to judge a book by its cover), or the author sounds like someone who has a story to tell.

So far I’ve found some real winners, the Excalibur Rising series and the General’s Legacy series are excellent.  A few have been so bad I deleted them immediately and most have been so-so.  This post reviews two in the so-so bunch.

Zero Flux by Carol Van Natta has a super cover.  What’s not to like with a flyer in a cave and the subtitle about the Central Galactic Concordance?  The novella builds on the cover with an interesting premise and setting but fails to deliver any sense of danger or tension.  Things just happen.

Luka Foxe’s old mentor Einer asks Luka and Mairwen to help him investigate two people found murdered in an ice cave on Luka’s very cold home planet.  Luka, Mairwen and Einer nearly die when the ice cave partially collapses and survive by taking refuge in an abandoned lab facility.  Unfortunately the facility alarm alerts the murderer who shows up and starts hunting all three.

This sounds exciting but it’s not.  Events happen with no sense of dread or tension from the danger, even when Luka realizes Einer has hidden much.  Author Van Natta tells us that Luka fears for Mairwen’s safety and his own, but we don’t feel it.  It’s flat.

The characters don’t have personalities.  Luka and Mairwen have unusual powers that don’t add much to the story.  The setting, an ice cave, should have felt cold.  It didn’t.  I couldn’t visualize much nor was it interesting.

Cold Flux is a novella in a larger series that has quite a few higher ratings on Amazon.  I finished the novella so am rating it 2 stars.  I kept reading expecting it to get better, it just never did.  There were hints of an interesting backstory and the writing wasn’t bad.

Soldier of Charity by Luke R. Mitchell is a prequel to his post apocalyptic Harvesters series.  Mitchell writes well and his main character Jarek is sympathetic, about 18 years old, idealistic and owns a protective high-tech exo suit with its own AI.

I mostly liked Soldier of Charity and wanted to like it more, but the novel was limited by its protagonist’s youth and lack of wisdom.  Several times I wanted to shake some sense into that kid.  For example, he joins a paramilitary group that protects outlying farms in exchange for some of their produce.  Now this is either the beginnings of feudalism or a classic shake down racket, but Jarek falls for the idea and joins the group enthusiastically.

Pryce, one of the men who recruits Jarek, is ambiguous.  He tells Jarek that the boss will never ask him to do something he doesn’t believe in, yet slowly leads Jarek into all sorts of grey areas.   Jarek starts to question these but continues to believe Pryce.  The ending with Pryce is a bit unbelievable as I doubt the character would have acted as he did.

Overall the novel is well done with solid writing, an intriguing idea and fairly well-done characters.  Ultimately my rating of 3 stars reflects that it is YA fiction and I didn’t enjoy it enough to check out the next books from this author.  Older teens would like this.

Filed Under: Near Future Tagged With: Book Review, Science Fiction, YA Science Fiction

The Last Star – Finale to Compelling 5th Wave Series

March 3, 2017 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Sometimes You Don’t Need to Know the Answers to Know What to Do

First the bad news.  Author Yancey never answers the questions of what the aliens were doing, why they invaded Earth, why they killed off so many, why they were so consistently cruel.  For the good news, most of our main characters survive and the tiny remnants of civilization remain.

Characters

Yancey developed his main characters, Cassey, Ringer, Ben, Evan and Sam, in the first two books and does very little to further them in The Last Star.  We do see Ringer developing tentative alliance with Cassey, and all the older characters keep trying to figure out what is going on, the alien’s plan and purpose.

The three main human characters, Cassie, Ben and Ringer, are confused and torn, angry and frustrated.  This feels real.  I don’t understand Ringer’s attitude towards Cassie, a little contemptuous until the end, but it fits her overall sense of superiority.  Ben is realistic, never quite sure of himself, never quite hopeful, never ready to give up, looking for people to love.

Evan is the saddest character, neither fully alien nor fully human.  Sam is stubborn.

Writing Style

The 5th Wave flows very well.  We have a start and an end and events and characters move one into the other.  The Infinite Sea takes a very different approach with mostly new characters and tone.  The Last Star is jerkier with pacing issues and diversions that don’t add much.

Yancey uses multiple points of view in The Last Star which gives more background and depth but also makes it less even.  The first POV character is the priest Silencer whom we re-encounter later as a 3rd party.  A few of the POV switches are disjointed.

The mood changes over the course of the series.  The 5th Wave characters are sad, frightened.  Cassie was terrified of being the last human and horrified that she had killed the crucifix soldier but we ended hopeful because Cassie and Evan ally and plan.   The Infinite Sea is darker as we see depths of cruelty and misery, but the characters are determined and will fight back.   The Infinite Sea has a sense of hopelessness in the beginning that changes; in the end we once more see hope albeit with sadness, loss and worry.

Plot Problems (Spoilers)

The ending is a bit too tidy.  In part it satisfies because we see hope for the future, a seed of family, community, learning.

Evan tells Ben there are more military bases than just the one in Ohio, and they also had been training kids to kill.  Evan takes his personal mission to clean up all these bases, killing thousands of indoctrinated kid soldiers.  The novel stops with Evan walking into the sunset, off to kill people while Ringer and Ben create a family and teach trust the hard way.

(Spoiler) The bomb requires one to breath in order to activate, which means the mother ship must have air.  Hmm.  If aliens are incorporeal why is there air?

(Spoiler)  Aliens embedded the program/personality/augmentation into Evan when he was in his mother’s womb, then activated it when he hit puberty.  At least some of the other Silencers and military leaders are adult humans.  Were they embedded as adults?  Or were their alien personalities (real or artificial) formed earlier?  If earlier then where was the mother ship all this time?

(Spoiler)  The Silencers expect to be evacuated before the aliens bomb every city and town on Earth.  Vosch tells Ringer that there are only 12 of the evacuation pods and none of the Silencers are going to the mother ship.  (Vosch lies all the time so we cannot know whether this is true.  It is true that he has a pod.)  So what are the Silencers going to do?  If they die in the bombardment then the 5th wave is done; if they lived then they too are betrayed.  Evan believes the Silencers would move to destroy the remaining bases but I don’t see the connection.  If I were a Silencer and my ticket home got torn up I’d fade into the background and be human.

(Spoiler)  Vosch has Evan’s character mind wiped, then reloads only the alien part with the result that alien Evan is solely a killer, no shred of personality or anything else.  Does that tell us the aliens are just killers?  Nothing else?  From a plot perspective, how did Ringer and Ben figure out which of the 10,000 plus personalities to reload?

There are other too-neat or unrealistic plot issues, but mostly they don’t get in the way of a solid book.

What Were the Aliens Doing?

Option 1.  Destroy Trust to Destroy Civilization

Ringer ends up believing the aliens are trying to reduce human populations and permanently twisting us to never trust, never again come together as community, never again build civilization, never again take over the earth and destroy other living creatures. Vosch hints at this with her although he never came out and agreed.  Destroying trust to destroy humanity while leaving a few humans alive is certainly one possibility, but it doesn’t make sense.

True, the aliens used unbearably cruel methods to kill the survivors of the first four waves.  They are betrayal itself, first of all the people who died, then of their children/soldiers and weaponized toddlers; even their Silencers are to be betrayed by abandonment and bombardment.

But consider this.  If you do not yourself witness small groups dying because they brought a booby-trapped child inside their home, would you still learn the lesson to trust no one?  I suppose if everyone who does trust dies, then the remaining survivors may have less innate tendency to trust and form communities (assuming there is some genetic factor behind trust).  But overall I don’t see this working.

I don’t believe the no-trust rule would settle permanently into our collective hearts.  People are hardwired to form families, to reach for something more than themselves, to build communities.  We need trust to have children, trust to form families.  Small families turn into larger family groups, then tribes, then hello civilization.  We could end up with Stone Age family group sizes but I don’t see how this could end up permanent.  The aliens would have to re-teach the lesson every few hundred years.

Last, for a group that supposedly venerates life they sure kill a lot of people.

Option 2.  Keep a Small Number of People for Hosts, aka Kill the Humans and Take Over

Evan believes that he is an alien personality downloaded into a human host.  He discusses the aliens’ origin and names with Vosh and is convinced that his purpose was to kill enough humans for the aliens to take over Earth.

This option makes more sense to me than number 1, although it begs the question how the aliens would operate without bodies and why they needed a planet if they were pure thought.

Option 3.  Aliens are Killers First Last and Always

Vosh strips out the human Evan leaving only alien Evan.  That stripped Evan is a killer, nothing else, no goal other than to kill everyone he can.  If this is typical alien mind, then the aliens are here to kill.  Perhaps they are just plain evil.

Option 4.  Something Else

It’s possible the entire story is a lie, that the aliens do in fact have bodies and are in fact trying to kill off everyone so they can take over the planet free of annoying humans.  Or something else, pick your favorite.

Ultimately

In the end it doesn’t matter why the aliens did what they did.  We don’t know and that’s probably Yancey’s purpose here.  The characters wouldn’t know.

If the purpose were to destroy trust – permanently – then Ringers and Ben’s determination to live with trust, to form community, to regain civilization would be the answer.  And if the purpose were to take over Earth, then Ringer and Ben’s nascent community and others with like minds would be bulwark against that takeover.

We don’t need to know the answer to enjoy the novel and the series, and the guessing adds to the sense of sorrow and terror that Cassie and Ringer and Ben and Sam and Evan would feel.

Overall

I can’t give The Last Star 5 stars, mostly because it doesn’t flow as well as it should and because the characters don’t change much.  It is otherwise enjoyable and thought-provoking.

4 Stars

Filed Under: Near Future Tagged With: Book Review, Rick Yancey, Science Fiction, YA Science Fiction

Reclaim by J. A Scorch – Alien Invasion

February 12, 2017 by Kathy Leave a Comment

I admit it.  I’ve a weakness for stories about aliens invading Earth, provided they are reasonably well-written, with interesting characters and a modicum of believability.  Reclaim by new Australian author J. A. Scorch fits the bill.  Reclaim has its weaknesses, namely some implausible character interactions, but it is well-plotted and full of likable people, all fighting to have a home and a future for humankind.

Plot and Writing Style

One real problem everyone who writes about desperate-humans-fighting-alien-invaders (DHFAI for short) has is the basic issue of why would there be many human survivors at all?   And why wouldn’t the huge invader ships orbiting Earth simply blow them away?  Lots of writers assume that the survivors are tiny remnants and the invaders simply haven’t gotten around to them yet.  (Think Independence Day.)  Scorch took the challenge of devising a reasonable answer, which the Earth forces are likewise trying to discover and exploit.

Reclaim is a fast read, clear and easy to follow.  There weren’t an weird names nor did Scorch spend much time detailing all the wondrous weapons which all too many writers like to do.  He combined narration and dialogue to tell the story

Characters

The story splits between two brothers, Teve in the united Earth army near the remnants of Los Angeles, and Bradley, a fighter pilot from the Mars space navy.  Scorch alternates viewpoints, with Porter giving us a bird’s eye view of the overall war plus the Martian response and dedication, and Teve sees the on-the-ground mess and desperation.

Both characters have good friends and fellow fighters who are close comrades and the interplay between these gives the novel its life and moments of humor.  Scorch uses dialogue to tell the story and show us the people involved.

Moments of Implausibility

Books like this have to be carefully and tightly plotted to feel real; it’s a tough challenge to write about Earth being conquered by aliens while still allowing for life and resistance and a story.  If you read this type of novel you know the wince feeling you get when something truly stupid glares through.  Reclaim had a couple of small wince moments.

Porter has to crash land into his carrier, towed by his wingman and flung through the door.  Porter and his wingman both joke that the Mars higher ups would probably rather they had blown up than caused the dings and dents on the hanger.  That didn’t feel right.  Given the fact over 70% of humanity is dead, and that it takes years of experience for a pilot to be as good as Porter, I had to believe the higher ups would far rather keep him and others alive.

There were several comments along similar lines, suggesting the Mars leaders were perfectly happy to throw people and ships at the invaders’ ships orbiting Earth, even accepting 90%+ losses for what appeared small gains, dropping packages off to Earth and getting updates back.  (I could understand they would accept almost any loss if it meant destroying the invaders’ ships.)

There were similar scenes in the Earth-based forces, where the Teve’s commander seemed willing to throw people away.  These seemed more realistic because the losses were mainly newbies. This same commander also threw a tantrum when Teve was not able to achieve the impossible.

There were incidents between Brad and his superior officers that didn’t feel right either, especially when he was punished for questioning the strategy to throw everybody and everything at the invaders, knowing that left Mars essentially defenseless in the event of failure.

My one complaint with the plot is the ending.  There are plenty of set up moments to point us in the direction Reclaim goes, including Teve’s supplier of Diazepan and his fascination with alien tech, the general prohibition on touching the alien’s constructs.  Nonetheless the final ending seemed like a bit too pat, and a bit of a sideways jerk, not quite right.

Overall

I will surely read the second book in the series since I enjoyed Reclaim and am a sucker to find out just how Scorch intends to free the Earth and hopefully maintain the unity between Earth and Mars and among the Earth countries.  Reclaim was one of the better DHFAI novels with an ambitious premise, rather good writing and interesting people.

4 Stars

Filed Under: Space and Aliens Tagged With: Book Review, Science Fiction

The Argent Star by Emerson Fray, YA Science Fiction/Fantasy

December 31, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Somehow I missed that The Argent Star is YA fiction until I recieved a copy from NetGalley (meaning I’m obliged to read it) and started in.  The book has several events that require leaps of faith, something I see in YA more than in adult fiction, meaning that things just happen, gadgets just happen to be available and people just happen to be around when you need them.

The basic outline could be fleshed out into a fairly good novel:  The Monarchy rules many star systems and has recently rediscovered the planet Novae and selected Ren’s father to be its new ruler.  Ren is no dummy and figures this is not as simple and clean as everyone tells her it is, and soon discovers Novae rebels are not so happy with the Monarchy and Ren’s family taking over.  There are hints of forerunner people and possible interesting back story elements but The Argent Star doesn’t explore them.

Ren is smart and a likable heroine who has a lot of common sense and the good taste to reject the suitor the Monarchy picked out for her. Unfortunately the plot doesn’t keep up with the characters as we have all sorts of events just happen that eventually set up Ren to negotiate with the Monarchy’s military leader for Novae’s independence.

Overall I think younger teens, say 12-15, would enjoy this, especially girls.  Ren is far shrewder than her brother Elian and outwits the Monarchy a few times, making her someone that younger girls will like.  The novel isn’t for adults.

I would rate The Argent Star 2 stars if rating for adults, but 3 stars for teens for whom Emerson Fray wrote the novel.

Filed Under: Young Adult Science Fiction Tagged With: Book Review, YA Fantasy, YA Science Fiction

All Our Wrong Todays – Jetsons World or Ours? Loneliness or Love?

November 17, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

All Our Wrong Todays is an imaginative time travel story starring Tom Barren as a guilt-ridden doofus in a Jetsons world who never seems to quite get it right.  Tom’s world diverged from ours in 1965 when scientist Lionel Gottreider demonstrated a power source that used the Earth’s motion – clean, non-polluting, infinite.  The power source gave off radiation; in Tom’s original world Gottreider leaves it run and he and the 12 scientists observing the experiment die a few months later, but only after Gottreider gives the technology to the world.

Tom is miserable for lots of reasons and impulsively jumps into the time travel machine his father invented.  Unfortunately, true to his track record, he forgets to use the suit designed to keep time travelers invisible and unable to interact with the past and unable to change history.  When Tom goes back to the crucial moment he startles Gottreider and interrupts the experiment.  Gottreider survives and Tom returns to the present.

Our present.  No flying cars, no fantastic gadgets, good-bye peace and hello to the world we know, as mucked up as ever.  Tom is now John Barren, a visionary architect with loving parents and a sister.  Tom has much happier life as John but is torn by grief and guilt for destroying his original world and causing millions of people to never be born.  Of course it could be worse.  Gottreider’s experiment has a third possible outcome, a massive meltdown that destroys North America and causes Tom to be Victor, a vicious special ops agent.

Characters

What makes All Our Wrong Todays work is the character, Tom/John/Victor.  He stays himself, Tom mostly, as he tries to integrate Tom and John, learns to enjoy his family, falls in love.  We walk along with Tom as he develops a personality, possibly the first time he’s ever been himself and not just his father’s son or the famous architect.  He meets Penny and learns to love, meets his sister and learns what it is like to have a family that cares about him.  He gives a talk about his architectural vision and learns what it is like to be successful.

All through Tom never stops thinking of himself as at least part doofus, trying to figure out what to do to correct the world – and trying to decide whether that’s the right thing to do if it is even possible.  We can imagine ourselves in the same situation because Tom isn’t a miracle worker or a hero, he is just a guy and kind of a failure.

Tom learns to enjoy his new world, despite the guilt, decides flying cars are no match for a happy, fulfilling life.  Still he knows the world as a whole is less well-off, less peaceful and he wrestles with the question whether to risk everything to put the world back even if he loses himself.

A Lot of Fun

Some time travel stories are awful, with bad plots or cardboard characters or too much technical jabber.  Most lack a sense of fun.  All Our Wrong Todays feels right.  We can imagine being Tom, making the wrong choice, ending the world as he knows it, trying to discover what is true vs. imaginary, trying to correct the problem.

All Our Wrong Todays reminded me of The Door Into Summer, one of my favorite novels from Robert Heinlein.  It has a similar sense of an individual who is caught up in time gone wrong and who then must correct the outcome.  The Door Into Summer was about one person with little sense that his mix up affects the world, while All Our Wrong Todays has a more consequential change and Tom has a personal and global impact.

Debut Novel

All Our Wrong Todays is the first novel by Elan Mastai who is screenwriter.  I don’t see room here for a sequel, unless Mastai uses the same setting and it will be interesting to see where he goes next with writing.  Dutton will publish All Our Wrong Todays  in February 2017 and Paramount has already picked it up for film.

4+ Stars

I received All Our Wrong Today’s from Net Galley in expectation of a review.

Filed Under: Near Future Tagged With: Book Review, Loved It!, Science Fiction

The Best of All Possible Worlds – Wife Hunting on Cygnus Beta

October 16, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

In Karen Lord’s The Best of All Possible Worlds humanity is descended from four primary planetary group and their cross-breeds.  Long-lived Sadari masters of mental discipline, subsume their emotions into strong telepathic bonds; the Ntshune are emotional, masters of the heart, strong empaths; Zhinu are strong with things, technology and trade while Terrans are “unmatched in spirit”, strong in mind, heart and body.  Terra (Earth) is quarantined but the rest of humanity can see everything we do and has access to our current arts and literature; Shakespeare and Casablanca are well known.

People on Cynus Beta are a mix of all four with many having been rescued from dire situations by the Caretakers.  Our heroine Delerau is half Terran and Ntshune while her counterpart Dllenahkh is full Sadiri.

The Best of All Possible Worlds opens with Sadira, the home planet destroyed and the only Sadiri survivors are mostly men, those who were off planet at the time.  Author Karen Ord notes that the 2004 Indian Ocean tsunami left mostly male survivors which is the inspiration for her novel.  The central question for Dllenahkh is:  What shall the Sadiri do to survive as a culture and race?  Shall they double down and maintain strict racial purity?  Or seek out taSadiri, those Sadiri who do not practice the mental disciplines?  Or cross-breed with other humans but raise the children as Sadiri?

To that end Dllenahkh and Delerau are part of a science team visiting the many taSadiri settlements on Cygnus Beta to evaluate potential wives.  This sounds horribly clinical, eugenic, although Lord makes it clear that human interests and likes are a very large concern.

You might not think that a wife hunt makes a good plot for a science fiction novel, and if you are looking for action or exotic locales then The Best of All Possible Worlds is not for you.  Lord uses the agglomeration of societies on Cygnus Beta to provide plot movement although the biggest events happen inside Delerau’s heart and mind.

Characters

Dllenahkh is complex.  It is unfair to say he’s unemotional and he’s no Mr. Spock with logic overriding all emotions.  Instead the Sadiri are extremely emotional and the only methods to keep from running amok are to become a mind ship pilot, form a close emotional telepathic bond to a spouse, or serious mental discipline and meditation.  That need for a close telepathic bond is the driver for the wife hunt; finding compatible wives is truly a matter of life or death.

We see him as a complicated person but I don’t think we really get to know Dllenahkh.

Delerau is easier to know.  She narrates the story and we see events and people through her eyes, struggle with her through the emotional tangles with Dllenahkh and her family.  She faces a difficult problem when the science team visits the isolated enclave Kir’tahsg and discovers almost slavery and coerced sexual relations.  She decides to run genetic analyses on individuals, when such analyses violate the General and Science Codes.  Even though this this has to be a difficult ethical choice for her, it seems distant, remote and I don’t feel we are privy to her decision or its difficulty.

Plot and Setting

The wife search gives Lord a chance to show off around ten different cultures, all on the same planet and all descended from Sadiri.  They range from the Faery Queen (yes, the Terran version) to an abandoned underground city to a secretive, monastic, isolated group of adepts.  The culture descriptions and the little touches to show the people and their settings were by far the best part of the novel.

Overall

I enjoyed The Best of All Possible Worlds.  It was different from anything I’ve read before, even from other science fiction/romance novels.  The writing is good and the characters are interesting with a plausible plot and actions.

The Caretakers are so intriguing that it’s a shame we see very little of them.  We don’t know who they are or why they act to rescue people.  One of them may make an appearance near the end of the novel.

If you like your science fiction full of dire threats and extravegent action then skip The Best of All Possible Worlds.  If you like reading about people in impossible but subtle situations then try it.

4 Stars

Filed Under: Near Future Tagged With: Book Review, Romance Novels, Science Fiction

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