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Five Betty Neels Romances – Making Sure of Sarah, Waiting for Deborah, A Suitable Match, Right Kind of Girl, All Else Confusion

November 25, 2018 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Betty Neels was unusual Harlequin romance author.  None of her books has any smut, profanity, blasphemy, vulgarity or even innuendo; all of her novels feature youngish ladies who are kind, warm hearted, sensible, resourceful, self-reliant and who range from plain to gorgeous.

All the novels have a Cinderella feel to them although all of the heroines are capable and willing to go it alone – even against hardships, uncaring family, bad luck, and even against their own heart.  I enjoy them and am glad that Hoopla digital now offers most of her 134 published novels.

Making Sure of Sarah

Making Sure of Sarah, published in 1998, has a lovely digital cover showing a house set on a hillside in gently rolling country marked with the colors of fall.  Most of the action takes place in London or in the Dutch city of Arnhem.

Sarah lives in London with her ineffectual mother and nasty stepfather and the three get into an accident when her stepfather drives their car into a ditch in the Dutch countryside.  She meets Litrik ter Breukel when he operates on her stepfather’s badly broken leg.  Litrik falls in love with Sarah, gives her a place to stay until her stepfather is able to travel, then pulls strings to help her get a job when they return to England and her parents vacation for several months.

The main conflicts are emotional:  Sarah falls for Litrik too and is reluctant to marry him when she doesn’t think he loves her; he thinks she is involved with a young English doctor and Sarah isn’t sure how to tell him that she is not.  There are no ex-girlfriends.

Story ends with Sarah marrying Litrik and moving to Holland.

Waiting for Deborah

Waiting for Deborah starts with redhead Deborah needing a job.  She took care of her stepfather until he died, now her stepbrother and stepsister tell her they inherited everything, she gets nothing, but she can stay rent-free (and income free) in their father’s house until they sell it.

Deborah says phooey to this and gets a job caring for an older lady recovering from a stroke and where she meets Sir James, consulting doctor.  After the lady’s niece fires Deborah, she gets temporary work in a hotel – about 14 hours a day – until Sir James takes her away to care for a friend’s elderly uncle for a few weeks, followed by a week at Sir James’ old nurse, followed by a stint as a mother’s help.

Eventually Deborah moves to London to learn typing and shorthand, fails at both, her landlady dies and again Sir James shows up, this time to take her back to his nurse’s home and ask her to marry him.

Neels wrote lovely characters in Waiting for Deborah, especially Uncle Oscar, the crochety elderly uncle with the tastes of a lively kid.  He spots the budding romance between Deborah and Sir James before James completely realizes it himself, and he comments just enough to get the ball rolling.

The conflict here is whether Deborah and Sir James will realize they love each other and whether Deborah can make a go of supporting herself.  No ex-girlfriends make trouble, the selfish step siblings make little inroads and all action takes place in England.

A Suitable Match

A Suitable Match is one of Neels’ more complicated novels, where the hero and heroine marry before one of them realizes they love each other.  Eustacia takes a job as bottle washer and errand-runner at the local hospital’s pathology lab to help her and her grandfather survive in London.  Eustacia runs into Sir Colin who is caring for his two young nephews and going slightly crazy with the responsibility.  Sir Colin offers Eustacia a job caring for his nephews, and both she and her grandfather can live in his country home.

Sir Colin becomes the boys’ guardian when their parents die in a plane crash and he asks Eustacia to marry him to strengthen his guardianship against the claims of his brother’s unpleasant in laws.  Of course they have the usual misunderstandings as both love the other without realizing the other loves them.

The main conflicts are misunderstandings as to true feelings.  One scene in the novel disturbs me.  The younger boy acts up and his grandmother punishes him, at which the older boy smacks her.  Eustacia is angry at the grandmother and does not agree that the boy should be punished for hitting her.  This is wrong.  Obviously the grandmother doesn’t remember how to care for youngsters but no child should strike his grandparent.

The Right Kind of Girl

Emma lives at home in a small country town with her mother and works as a companion where she meets Dr. Paul Wyatt.  Her mother has a stroke and Dr. Wyatt takes her to the hospital and cares for her.  Emma has to leave her job to care for her mom, who dies after a few weeks.  Paul falls in love with her while caring for her mother and asks her to marry him.   They marry after a couple minor contretemps.

Sadly Emma runs afoul of Diana, who either wants to marry Paul or just likes to make trouble.  A few scenes in the book are a bit hard to take; for example Paul believes Diana’s lies about Emma helping some tinkers without even trying to ask Emma about the situation.  He also tells her that Diana is worth a dozen of her.   Needless to say events work themselves out and both end up happy.

All Else Confusion

Here is another Neels novels where the two marry without realizing they both love each other.  In my mind this is by far the weakest of the five described here because there is no reason for Jake to rush Annis into marriage.  There is no crisis, no poverty trap, no lack of family and no real good reason for such a fast wedding.

Here the conflict is mostly one of misunderstanding, both of oneself and one’s spouse.

Overall

I enjoy clean stories with happy endings, and I’ve no problem with a touch of Cinderella – provided that the girl doesn’t just sit in the ashes and whine but actively seeks to better her life on her own.  All of Neels’ heroines try to handle life’s ups and downs as best they can.  Deborah for instance takes several menial jobs to support herself; Sarah is reluctant to marry a man who doesn’t love here and abhors pity.

On the other hand a couple of the heroes tread close to being mean, and the hero is actually quite nasty in The Right Kind of Girl.  Some of the girls allow their men to push them around just a little while others accept guidance but don’t accept manipulation or bossiness.

I recommend these if you want an easy to read novel, perfect for a cold evening by the fire.  I didn’t care for All Else Confusion but the others are lovely light romance reads.

Filed Under: Romance Fiction Tagged With: Not Fantasy or Science Fiction, Romance Novels

Stuck in Manistique by Dennis Cuesta – Gentle Comedy in a Small Michigan Town

October 1, 2018 by Kathy Leave a Comment

How could I pass up a novel set in Manistique, a small town along a beautiful stretch of Lake Michigan beach in the Upper Peninsula?  Stuck in Manistique is unusual, a bit of romance with a touch of screwball comedy, and meant-to-be-quirky characters.

Protagonist Mark is a financial planner in suburban Chicago who inherits his aunt’s home in Manistique, not realizing it is a bed & breakfast.  He quickly learns when his first guest, young medical resident Emily shows up, fresh from deciding to walk away from her affair with her mentor doctor.  Emily has nowhere to go because the town’s hotel is full with a bus tour group and she hit a deer on US 2 and the town’s dealership cannot fix her Saab quickly.  Mark allows Emily to stay, followed by elderly George, then weird maybe couple Yvonne and Peter.  In between all this Mark must scatter his aunt’s ashes on Indian Lake with the help of Bear Foot, a local visionary friend of his aunt.

So far so good, we have the screwball elements in place with people coming and going, all while our hapless innkeeper is the victim of his own kindness.  Romance, death, revelation all ensue.

Stuck in Manistique is short; it won’t take more than a couple hours to read.  There isn’t much action beyond eating at the various pubs and pizza joints, running along the shoreline, paddle boating on Indian Lake and driving around the UP and the northern Lower Peninsula.  The main story is the people.

  • What is the connection between Mark and Emily?  They both feel something, but it isn’t romance.
  • Will Mark decide to stay in Manistique?
  • Will Emily finally cut the connection with her adulterous lover/boss?
  • Can Mark get over his fear of bridges?  (Believe me, you do not want to drive over the Mackinaw Bridge if you are afraid of bridges!  It’s huge.)
  • Can Emily come to peace with her guilt over Nicholas?
  • Will George ever catch up with his tour group?
  • Will Peter and Yvonne make it around Lake Michigan in his electric car?

Simple questions.  The author manages to bring these together in a gentle comedy that is engaging, and combines it with beautiful setting and an atmosphere of What Next Can Go Wrong?

There is almost enough meat to the characters to make Stuck in Manistique a winner.  The people tell us about themselves, and while we see Mark being kind in action, that kindness doesn’t quite align with his internal story about dumping his girlfriend when she wanted to get married.

Writing is good although don’t expect a lot of action or snappy dialogue.  The characters are the story here.

3 to 4 Stars

I received this via NetGalley in exchange for a review.

 

Filed Under: Humor Tagged With: 3 Stars, Book Review, Contemporary, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Review: That Thing Around Your Neck – Short Stories by Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie

January 17, 2017 by Kathy Leave a Comment

The first story in this collection, “Cell One”, is set solely in Nigeria, time not given but likely in the last 20 years.  I read this as part of December’s A Season of Stories and it is unforgettable.

As in most of the other stories, Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie tells Cell One through the eyes of a young woman, sister to trouble-making Nnamabia, the brother her parents favor and cosset.  Both young people attend a Nigerian university that is frequently beset by violence as cults (gangs) of young men attack each other, often resulting in murder.  The police arrest and jail Nnamabia after a fatal attack and his sister and parents visit him in jail every day via a 2 hour drive.

“Cell One” reaches its emotional height by how matter of fact the sister narrates the events, from shake downs by the highway police to shake downs and bribes in the jail to the endless beatings and humiliation.  The brother tries to spare the life and dignity of an older man who is imprisoned because the authorities cannot find his son; the guards beat this older man daily and the brother risks his own life to try and stop it. We do not know what happens after, whether the brother grows up after this or slides back to being the favored child who gets away with stealing from his own mother.

That Thing Around Your Neck includes several stories set in both America and Nigeria.  One of my favorites is “Imitation”, about a Nigerian wife, Nkem, whose husband is a Big Man back home.  He moved her and their children to America while he spends 50 weeks a year back home.  When the wife discovers he is bringing his mistress to their home in Lagos she decides to move everyone back to Nigeria, standing up to her husband for the first time ever.  I enjoyed the character Nkem and her combination of realistic expectations (of course her husband strays) with determination to have a real marriage and family life.

Several stories showed how both Americans and Nigerians may have nutty ideas about each other, making overly sweeping generalizations about behavior and culture.  One example was “Jumping Monkey Hill” where Edward, the literature seminar leader gently refuses to believe one author’s work is truly African, stating “how African is it for a person to tell her family that she is homosexual?”.  In “The Arrangers of Marriage” the new husband seeks a lighter-skinned Nigerian wife, then has her use only her middle name, Agatha, and tries to turn her into an American, cooking American food, speaking American English.

Many of Adichie’s characters are away from home, are lonely, horribly lonely even when surrounded by people or married.  The stories are good because we connect with the people.  Adichie uses the short story form well, focusing on people’s feelings, their fears and longing, telling stories with small plots and big characters.

5 Stars

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Wheat That Springeth Green by J F Powers – A Priest’s Life and Growth

June 26, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

I read Wheat That Springeth Green by J F Powers several years ago and the characters stuck in my mind like a song that you hear every now and then and each time stop to listen.

The novel follows Joe Hackett through his youthful sympathy for older priest Father Day, to his teenaged sexual encounters with the girl and maid next door (complete with syphilis) through the seminary with his pig-headed pursuit of his image of God, to his work as the Catholic pastor in Ingenook.

Along the way Joe struggles to live a life of virtue, to help others reach sanctity, to be a good man and a good priest.  He tries a hair shirt and hours on his knees in the seminary but is never able to achieve the immediate and obvious union with God that he seeks.  He fights disillusionment and an ever-growing beer belly, parishioners’ stinginess and the constant battle between holiness and worldliness.

Writing Style

J. F. Powers combined stream-of-conscious with modest narrative, all from Joe’s point of view, and abrupt changes of scenery and time.  The book would be a little easier to follow with a bit more narrative.  For example, Joe finally gets assigned as a pastor to his own parish, but we have to surmise that by the change in tone and topic in a new chapter.

The stream-of-conscious thoughts are Joe wrestling with a problem, neatly listing the pros and cons, and sometimes the dialogue he wants to have but cannot.  The archbishop increases the assessment against his parish, but Joe feels bound to not make money requests to his parish.  He implemented a flat fee concept with the promise that he wouldn’t ask for extra funds.

Joe imagines discussing this with the Arch, all with a happy ending.  Instead he and his assistant divide up the DPs (deliquent parishioners who don’t give) and visit some each evening to ask the families to live up to their stewardship responsibilities.  (We can imagine how well that works.  On average in any parish a third give regularly, a third give once in a while and a third never give.)

Characters

Joe is inherently kind and thoughtful, not what one would expect reading his famous question posed in seminary “How do we make virtue as attractive as sex?”  As a boy Joe sees his pastor, “Dollar Bill” treat his assistant Father Day rudely and be greedy with his parish.  As an adult Joe seeks out Father Day, makes him his confessor, treats him kindly and with great respect.

The most striking example was with Catfish Tooney, sorry, Monsignor Tooney, Joe’s former classmate and general pain in the neck in the diocesan chancery.  Joe built a nice rectory in his parish and wants the archbishop to bless it, but must go through Tooney who of course says no.  Later the archbishop asks Joe in person why he hasn’t had him out to bless the rectory and Joe bites his tongue and struggles for days to find a way to answer without calling out Tooney.  Most of us wouldn’t bother protecting a guy who’s been a jerk for years.

Humor with Seriousness

Wheat that Springeth Green is funny even while treating serious topics like God, faith, virtue, money, sex and dreams.  Joe has a good sense of humor and Powers does a good job showing us the funny moments, both inside and outside of Joe’s head.  We see Joe evolve from a precocious youngster to an obnoxiously self-important seminarian to an earnest priest dedicated to his own holiness and hopefully that of the people he serves, to a priest who compromises with the world to one who re-ignites his own faith.  Along the way we smile and maybe even laugh a bit at life.

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Contemporary, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Dear Committee Members – Life Via Letters of Recommendation By Julie Schumacher

June 14, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Have you ever asked someone to write a letter of recommendation?  Maybe a favorite teacher or neighbor when you wanted a job or a scholarship?  Have you ever wondered just what they said about you?

Wonder no more.  Instead read Dear Committee Members by Julie Schumacher.  The author tells the story of Jay Fitger, Professor of English at a small college in his own words, via letters of recommendation, complaints to the HR department, emails to his ex-wife and ex-girlfriend, letters to friends.

Professor Fitger has much to complain about.  His English department faces severe budget cuts, whacking the English graduate program, living in 3rd rate offices, with a department head borrowed from Sociology.  Fitger wants his current students to survive and thrive and worries about one in particular, Darren Browles.

Mr. Browles wrote a novel, or at least part of a novel, we aren’t really sure.  Although Browles never appears in the book, Fitger writes letter after letter – to his former friends, his ex-wife, his publisher, his agent – in short anyone he can think of who might bring this pseudo-masterpiece to print, or if nothing else, provide Browles with a few bucks.

Meanwhile Fitger’s other students are moving into corporate jobs or temporary work at liquor stores and trailer parks, going on to grad school, selling novels.  We see them all.  Only Browles remains, left behind, unwanted.

 

Characterization

Professor Fitger is the star of course and we learn much about him.  He’s in his mid/late 40s, balding, a bit fussy, a bit bitter, sarcastic, with distant memories of being just a bit more radical, a bit more successful.  He’s also lonely and prone to sabotage himself and any relationships.

He writes his letters with as much honesty and kindness as the student deserves.  One girl was desperate for a letter and her advisor was gone so she turned to Fitger whom she had seen around campus – after all he was in the building and almost no one else was.  Fitger wrote a charming letter, praising the student’s enterprise and determination while accurately describing how he was roped into writing the recommendation.

The book is full of funny comments like these, interspersed with heartfelt pleas to help Browles and to his ex-wife and girlfriend to please like him again.  We don’t see Fitger in his home, only his office, while he reminiscenses about his mistakes, how he included too much reality in his one successful novel, so much that his wife could not tell what parts were fiction and dumped him.  He remains on good terms with people right until he can’t help but do something to sabotage the friendship, for example, copying the entire university staff on an email to his girlfriend.

The setting is mostly inside Fitger’s mind with sharp descriptions of the falling-down academic building with its non-working plumbing.  We get a glimpse of cutthroat academic life where all new hires are non-tenure track adjuncts who live on air, pennies and dreams.  Fitger remembers it didn’t use to be like that and it drives him to write scathing letters to the dean.

I think I would like Fitger in small doses, preferably with a glass of wine.

Summary

Dear Committee Members is funny, poignant.  I recommend it to you without reservation!

5 Stars

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Renovating for Fun and Profit – Bricking It by Nick Spalding

January 2, 2016 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Have you ever built a house or done a major remodel?  Do you enjoy This Old House and similar house makeover shows?  Do you like a funny book?  Then get a copy of Bricking It by Nick Spalding and get ready to relive your shudders and that horrible feeling as the costs creep ever up.

Danny and Haley Daley inherited a derelict farmhouse deep in the Hampshire countryside from their grandmother.  (Their parents got cash.)  The house had woodworm, critters, critter droppings, mold, sagging walls and floors, an attic floor that’s so rotted Danny falls through, plus the to-be-expected damaged kitchen, bath, subsiding foundations, overgrown shrubbery, and so on.  Neither has any money or any home Do-It-Yourself skills.

But…  Haley found from the local realtor that the house would sell as-is for about 160,000 pounds or – get this – if renovated for about 600,000 pounds.  They could expect to pay about 160,000 pounds for the renovation work (and we who have been through this know that will inevitably increase), but they stand to make over 300,000 pounds when selling the house.  That’s a big amount, enough to make anyone reconsider.

They agree to proceed.  Bricking It is not This Old House or Rehab Addict in written form and it doesn’t cover all the work hammer nail by hammer nail.  Instead it touches on what Danny and Haley do and feel.  Some of the vignettes are pretty funny as when Danny burns a bunch of big green weeds in the back corner and gets high on the marijuana smoke; some are gross as when Danny has an internal emergency while up in the rafters; some are fun as when Haley realizes she is more concerned with her house than with the bomb disposal squad that’s removing the WW2 bomb in the yard.

Overall the book does a reasonable job on characterization, both Danny and Haley grow and manage to get out of nasty personal ruts.  Danny even discovers that a girl’s beautiful outside doesn’t make up for a boring inside!  Spalding does  good job on minor characters like Gerard who is filming this as part of a British home improvement show, Fred the contractor and of course Pat The Cow.

It does not capture the horrible feeling one gets when trapped in a sea of construction debris and debt; instead the characters and episodes are positive and the ending is a bit over the top.  I didn’t care for the coarse language and potty humor – there is plenty of ordinary humor in any building project that Spalding didn’t need a couple of the potty events – but discovering their grandmother had run a brothel for a few years was priceless.

Overall I’d give this 4 stars. Bricking It is easy to read and rather fun.  I didn’t enjoy it enough to look for more by Spalding but this was worth reading if you have a couple spare hours – and are considering whether to remodel or just tear it down and move.

I got a copy of Bricking It for free from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

Filed Under: Humor Tagged With: Book Review, Humor, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Home by Matt Dunn, Book Review

November 7, 2015 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Home, by Matt Dunn, is one of those perfectly decent books that just misses.  This may be me and my tastes instead of the book itself as I was unable to get past the first couple pages of another book by Mr. Dunn, The Ex-Boyfriend’s Handbook.  I probably wouldn’t have finished Home either, except it came from Net Galley for a review.

There is nothing wrong with Home.  The writing is decent, main characters are well-done, setting is interesting, and the plot uses a universal conflict.

The primary story concerns Josh, who left the sad seaside town of Derton at 18 to pursue college and dreams of writing, plus his parents, his best friend, his former and almost-former girlfriends and his old high school nemesis.  Josh’s dad is dying of lung cancer and Josh has left London to come home, fully intending to stay a week or so then return to the bright lights and his advertising job.

While in Derton Josh breaks up with his current girl friend (we all cheer at this point), he loses his job, finds the girl he dumped at 18, realizes he should have stayed with her.  Eventually it works out but the process is a bit tedious.

Josh doesn’t believe in anything except that he doesn’t want to live in Derton.  That has driven him for 18 years, but a desire to flee is not a desire to live, and being against something doesn’t tell you what you are for.  He doesn’t like the superficial glitter that his girlfriend and boss embody (best line in the book describes his girlfriend’s closet as a “shrine to Jimmy Choo”), but he doesn’t know what to replace it with.

Josh stumbles around the emotional minefield of his dad’s illness and death, his fears and loneliness.  It takes him the full novel to do what we readers on page 3 see is the right course.

Overall I’d give this a solid 3 stars but don’t read it if you don’t like books where people are their own worst enemies.

 

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction

Down Where My Love Lives, Two Books by Charles Martin, The Dead Don’t Dance and Maggie

August 3, 2015 by Kathy Leave a Comment

First, know that Down Where My Love Lives is a compilation of two novels, The Dead Don’t Dance (Awakening Series #1)
and Maggie (Awakening Series #2). Also The Dead Don’t Dance was the first book Charles Martin published. I read these within a couple weeks of reading Where the River Ends, an excellent novel with many of the same themes.  Unfortunately Down Where My Love Lives felt like the rough draft.

Many reviewers describe Martin’s writings as sentimental, but I don’t agree with that assessment.  Martin includes emotion and he writes about love as the center point and reason for being.  Unfortunately this duology has a big dose of melodrama, but it is still good enough to be an enjoyable read.

The Dead Don’t Dance Book 1

The Dead Don’t Dance starts out with Dylan and Maggie, married for just a couple of years, expecting their first child.  Maggie seems compulsive, unrealistic and controlling, and Dylan’s devotion to her was puzzling.  She sure wouldn’t be my first choice of a spouse.

Dylan farms a large plot in South Carolina that he inherited from his grandparents, but they live on only $20,000 a year. Maggie spent several hundred on nice-but-not-essential baby things at the local baby store, far more than Dylan could afford, and freaked out when she found a black hair growing on her chin.

Their son is stillborn and Maggie hemorrhages and goes into a coma.  The novel alternates flashbacks to Dylan’s life before and with Maggie with his response to her long coma.  In the meantime Dylan starts a new job teaching English at the community college (which Maggie applied for unbeknownst to Dylan), delivers Amanda’s baby in the freezing rain, tries to make friends with Maggie’s pet pig Pinky, and tends Maggie every day.  He lets his farm go and loses his crop.

Throughout we see Dylan through his thoughts and actions and how others respond to him.  He is deeply committed to his wife, overall kind and thoughtful, caring, not terribly interested in money or worldly success.  He’s the type of guy you want to know and be friends with.

The exception was the episode that seemed completely pointless, cruel and had no place in the book, the raccoon hunt.  Raccoons can be vicious and pests in a city but the hunters went into a wild swamp to hunt the coons.  The raccoon in the swamp was surely no threat or pest.  Martin describes how Amos shot the coon – deliberately NOT killing it – so that it fell down through many feet of branches to get attacked and and eaten while alive by the coon dogs.   I don’t have a problem with hunting animals you plan to eat or to remove pests like the bazillion rabbits in our area, but first why would they hunt a wild raccoon they don’t plan to eat and second, why deliberately be that cruel?  And what was the possible reason to include this in the novel?  It gave no insight to Dylan or his friends except to make me dislike the bunch.

The Dead Don’t Dance was overall mediocre and had I read it before others by Charles Martin I would not have pursued any more of his novels.  It was OK at best.

Maggie

Martin wrote a sequel that picks up 17 months later, after Maggie awakens from her coma.  Dylan experienced serious emotional events while she was in the coma and finds it very hard to tell Maggie about them, partly because he doesn’t want to make her feel even worse than she already does about their stillborn child.  This part of the novel felt authentic to me.

Maggie had an intricate and ridiculous plot, picked up the story of Dylan’s love for Maggie and threw in the complication that Maggie may be unable to carry a child to term.  Oh, and throw in the fact that Dylan’s best friend and across-the-street neighbor married Amanda whose father’s enemies – former partners in crime – are after him and everyone close to him.  That leads to kidnapping Amanda, torching Dylan’s house, killing his dog, assaulting Maggie, burning down the father’s church.

The book is overly complex. Dylan and Maggie need to get acquainted in some sense; Dylan lived 4 months alone, buried their son alone, dealt with a new job alone.  Maggie missed all that and woke up with the fear for her child top of her mind.

Maggie gets pregnant but miscarries and she and Dylan decide to adopt.  However the agency looks askew at their finances, overall life style (truck instead of a mini van) and mostly at Maggie’s emotional health.  Dylan takes steps to become acceptable to them, borrowing $40,000 to finance the adoption, trading in his truck for a van, but Maggie is oblivious to the problems.

Now add the neighbor and best friend, Amos, whose father-in-law gave evidence that put his former partners in prison for years.  Those creeps are violent and want to destroy the father-in-law, his entire family, and for some reason, Dylan too.

The last plot point is about Bryce, a former US marine who is rich but lives in a trailer in a closed drive in movie theater.  Bryce is generous with time and money and likes Dylan and Maggie, and in return they take care of him to the extent he allows it.  The twist in Maggie is that Bryce changed; he is bathed, trailer picked up and repaired, he is back in shape.  Someone from the military comes to advise Bryce’s financial adviser and Dylan to keep away from him, that Bryce could snap.

Just like the first book, Dylan is interesting, someone you want to know.  Maggie seems selfish and controlling.  Amos is a great guy, Amanda too good to be true.  Characters are partially developed, not complete people.

Summary

Charles Martin shows flashes of the good writer he later proves to be.  He writes of the most ghastly places imaginable, swamps, South Carolina farms with swarms of mosquitoes, places where a “cool” evening is 78 degrees, and makes them almost seem desirable.  He emphasizes the heat and mugginess and bugs, that summer last 6 months or more, but you can tell that he loves it.  It’s home.  All of his books are set in these horrible places.

He writes of love, especially the committed love of true marriage, but from the husband’s perspective.  Most romance books are from the wife’s point of view and it is lovely to see a man confessing his love.

He used some similar elements in Maggie as in Where the River Ends.  Both have a sick wife, a disparate couple, committed marriage, no children, icky hot muggy swampy southern setting, lots of emotion.  In fact Martin uses the term “indomitable” to describe both Maggie and Abbie in Where the River Ends.  Martin learned to tidy up his plots and show his characters far better by the time he wrote Where the River Ends.

Overall I’d give this 2 or 3 stars.  A mediocre but tolerable first novel, ragged around the edges and not a good introduction to an excellent author.

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction, Romance Novels

Review: Let It Burn, by Steve Hamilton, An Alex McKnight Novel

June 28, 2015 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Steve Hamilton created a special character with Alex McKnight, and it is the character’s interaction with his friends and antagonists that make the series so special.  The other point that makes Hamilton’s books special is the setting in a remote part of Michigan’s Upper Peninsula.

Synopsis

With Let It Burn: An Alex McKnight Novel we have Alex but it is set in Detroit instead of Paradise, Michigan.  The book flips between Alex’s last big case the year his life changed and today as Alex learns that the man he helped get convicted of murder, Daryl King, is getting released from prison.  That gets Alex thinking and he mentally goes back to the few points on the case that didn’t strike him as quite right.

Alex drives to Detroit to have a drink with his old sergeant and see his would-be girlfriend, and on the way stops in Houghton Lake to see the detective he worked with on the murder case.  He ends up driving around the area in Detroit where they hunted and found the young Daryl and Alex even stops to meet Daryl’s mom.  Something about her conviction that Daryl could not have killed anyone brings all Alex’s reservations to the fore and he continues to dig into the case.

Then he finds his former detective co-worker murdered and the work shifts to be a hunt for Daryl Young.  Alex still is not convinced Daryl killed the woman years before and even less convinced he killed the detective, but Daryl is the obvious suspect.

Time Flashes

At this point Let It Burn starts flipping between 30 years ago and today as Alex first learns that there are other unsolved murders with the same MO as the first lady.  The comparisons between Detroit 30 years ago and today are sad but fascinating (and I think a little outdated given some of the improvements in the last year) and we go along with Alex as he retraces his thinking and the past case.

The Ending

The very first time the eventual killer was introduced in the story he struck me as the killer, although with no real reason.  Alex eventually stumbles around, as he usually does, and resolves the whodunit and nearly ends up dead himself.  I had mixed feelings about the ending.  It was good suspense, very much in character, fit all the other books.  However, there was no earthly reason for the real murderer to attack Alex.  He could have gotten away with it.

Then the after action seemed a bit misty.  Alex was concussed and the way he narrated the action fit the concussion.

Characters

As usual Alex made the book.  Leon, his erstwhile PI partner, and Jackie, his host at the Glasgow Inn, made small cameo appearances.  Vinnie did not show up at all.  I missed the usual cast.  Daryl’s mother and the detective and Alex’s former partner were good but not as quirky or as interesting as the usual Yooper group.

Overall Let It Burn: An Alex McKnight Novel was very good, certainly better than many suspense/mystery novels.  It wasn’t quite as compelling a read as Hamilton’s other Alex McKnight books but still excellent.  The time flashes were very well done and the shift in mood from pensive to active were spot on.  It also was a little less dark than some of Hamilton’s other books.  I just missed the usual quirky characters and the Upper Peninsula setting.

Filed Under: Suspense Tagged With: Book Review, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction, Suspense

Chasing Fireflies – Charles Martin – Growing Up, Family and Place

June 24, 2015 by Kathy Leave a Comment

Chasing Fireflies: A Novel of Discovery is another novel by Charles Martin set in the south with engrossing characters, frequent shifts in time and character and characters who are deeply mistreated but maintain grace throughout.  In Chasing Fireflies we have three stories:  Chase, who desperately wants to know who he is and whose he is, Sketch, an abused boy who is mute but communicates via drawing, Unc, who was framed and looted by his high-rolling brother Jack.

Chase narrates and seamlessly brings us between his memories growing up as Unc’s foster child and his current-day work investigating Sketch and his relationship with Unc and Unc’s niece Tommye who is dying of Aids.  I admired how Martin flipped between times and character focus.

Martin has a gift for making his characters come to life.  Unc is the most developed but we get a solid taste of Sketch.  Chase develops himself partly through his narration – some of which is self-pitying – and partly by his actions and observations of Unc and others.  We also see side characters like Jack, Unc’s wife Lorna, Chase’s friend Mandy.  Tommye tells her own story but it was the weakest of the bunch.  Her motives were unclear.

Chasing Fireflies has a very complex plot with lots of side journeys, some of which seemed a bit too much.  I did not understand why Unc, portrayed as a Christian man with deep grace, would have tossed a body into the river.  That seemed out of character and unnecessary.  We also heard at the beginning and near the end that evil brother Jack was after the last thing Unc owned, the Sanctuary in the middle of the 26,000 acres of swamp and timberland that Jack already extorted from Unc, but we never heard the pretext for the seizure.

The plot is melodramatic but still manages to be excellent.  I read this very fast one evening, then thought I may have missed something that would have clarified Tommye or Jack, so re-read it.  I hadn’t missed anything but the second time through I noticed a few plot and character false notes that hadn’t struck me as off kilter the the first time.

Chase’s constant refrain about wanting his Dad (no mention of Mom) and the aching hole he had as a foundling got a little tiresome.  The point of the book is family and belonging, but at some point we all have to face what is, good or bad.  Even those of us who grew up in loving families have aches in our hearts, it is part of life.

We see that Chase and Mandy are falling in love but their romance is a side conversation.  Martin could have explored that a little more, perhaps having someone to love would help heal Chase’s broken heart.

Overall I loved the book and will continue to look for books by this author.

Filed Under: Families Tagged With: Loved It!, Not Fantasy or Science Fiction, Romance Novels

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