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Under Darkness by Jasper Scott – Alien Invasion and Mind Control in Tropical Paradise

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Under Darkness is short, easy reading, fast-paced, and offers fun twists on the ever-popular alien invasion theme.  Our novel stars Bill Steele, new owner of a not-quite profitable hotel in Hawaii, who sees the sun covered, the stars come out and meteors fall in the middle of the day.  Pretty soon the screams start.

Jasper Scott writes a plot that combines all our favorite thriller/horror/science fiction themes:  Under Darkness has aliens with mind control, aliens who kill and eat almost everyone, international intrigue and nuclear attack, plus a giant tsunami.  The characters are decent, with enough heroism offset with normal fear and deception, to make the story feel real.

Scott has written several series (20 books altogether) that are popular and successful.  He promotes Under Darkness as a stand-alone, meaning no sequels, a refreshing change from some of the endless narratives out there in alien invasion series.  He writes well, with a beginning, a middle and an end and the end neatly wraps the story up, leaving a few interpersonal loose strings but no plot heartburn.

3 Stars

Dial G for Gravity (The Brent Bolster Mysteries Book 1) by Michael Campling

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Dial G for Gravity by Michael Campling, subtitled The Brent Bolster Mysteries Book 1, has great sounding plot and back story, but the writing and characterization don’t live up to the promise.  Let’s go to the good part first.

The plot idea is terrific:  Aliens are here peacefully.  The  Gloabons are die-hard bureaucrats (apparently the national mania) as well as die-hard anal probers.  It’s a little suspect whether they really are peaceful because their technology has pretty well wiped out ours and now we’re pretty dependent on them.  Plus there is yet another alien group with a taste for live humans – for supper.  There is plenty of serious stuff going on in the background.

The execution against this backdrop disappointed me.  The characters are mediocre, with hero Brent, a Galactic Investigator PI, a meld of all the PI tropes you’ve ever read.  The best character is the alien Rawlgeeb, a bureaucrat through and through, but good-hearted once the i’s are dotted and the t’s are crossed.  He is the first clue that the supposedly benign Gloabons may be anything but; he greatly fears for his life when he makes a mistake abducting Brent for “sampling”, aka Probing.  Apparently Gloabons that make too many mistakes end up dead or exiled to nasty places.

The writing is supposed to be humorous, and had it been the book would have been more enjoyable.  A lot of other readers apparently liked this much more than I as several Amazon reviewers found the book funny and the characters well done.

The book had a great cover and this nifty of a plot background that kept me reading, thinking it would get better.  Unfortunately Dial G for Gravity never lived up to its premise.

2 Stars

Earth Warden by Tony James Slater – Great Blurb, Boring Book

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Earth Warden: A Sci Fi Adventure, book 1 of The Ancient Guardians series by Tony James Slater should be excellent.  The plot has everything one could want in a science fiction story:  suspense, intrigue, a fascinating universe and back story.  Unfortunately the writing is flat, making the novel more of a chore than a delight to read.

The characters also should capture our interest and liking.  Young Tristan lives alone in Bristol, supporting himself by small time thieving after his father disappears.  He is more-or-less kidnapped by Kreon, a mysterious Warden, and taken off into interstellar space to become Kreon’s apprentice.  Along the way we have lots of battles and characters that show up and then fade away, and hints of overwhelming danger to Earth.

Tristan simply does not act the way any normal older teen would when confronted with a galactic civilization – comprised of humans biologically identical to us Earth folks – and off hand comments about Wardens and danger and existential threats and eons of unknown history.  He never once asks how come everyone he meets is a human?  Why is Earth protected?  Why do the Wardens exist and what are they warding?  Never.  Not one peep of intelligent questioning.

The story and the characters never came to life.  I forced myself to slog through on the vague chance that the book would improve, or that the author would show flashes of skill that might make subsequent novels worth reading.  No.  In fact the only reason I’m giving this 2 stars and not 1 is that I did in fact finish reading.

2 Stars

The Artifact Enigma: An Urban Fantasy Action Adventure The Daniel Codex Book 1

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The Artifact Enigma: An Urban Fantasy Action Adventure by Judith Berens, Martha Carr and Michael Anderle is the first book in a (so far) three book series, The Daniel Codex.  The back story and plot elements are mouth-watering:  Magic is swarming over the earth because our magical sister planet Oricera now aligns fully to us and magical people now walk and live in our midst.  At the same time our CIA is trying to understand a separate group of aliens, people from other planets outside our solar system.

Daniel Winters is a CIA agent because he wants to serve and protect at the same time he helps his grandfather with his combination magical oddity and antiques business.  Daniel stumbles into a deep plot to do something with the aliens.  In fact the CIA already erased one entire town after messing up with an alien meet and greet.  Or something.  Daniel really doesn’t know anything about this other CIA group’s motives or goals, but he decides to throw in with a rogue group dedicated to keeping us and the aliens and Oricera safe from trigger-happy CIA folks.

This sounds like it should be a great story, but The Artifact Enigma is flat.  I feel no connection to any of the characters and it doesn’t appear that the authors tried to involve readers into the story.  The plot moves fast with plenty of action, but even the action is subdued, distant, doesn’t feel real and left me just not caring.

The final sequence is particularly telling as Daniel becomes judge, jury and executioner for a gang trying to take over his neighborhood.  After pages of high-minded yakking about duty and service and not wanting to kill people, our hero just walks into the gang house and kills everyone.

I doubt I’ll read any more of this series, although the plots sure sound tempting.

3 Stars

Impact by Douglas Preston – Suspense and International Intrigue in a Science Fiction Background

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Impact starts as suspense, a thriller with two strands.  Ex-CIA Wyman Ford travels to Cambodia to find the source of some new, beautiful and highly radioactive amber colored gem stones.  Resourceful Wyman manages to reach the mine site in the back hills of Cambodia, braving murderous ex-Pol Pot Brother #6, gem dealers, corrupt local officials.  He finds the mine is far too large for the CIA to have missed in aerial reconnaissance and it is run by sadists who force peasants to labor in the radioactive pit.

Wyman figures out the pit is actually the exit point from a meteor and decides to find where it entered.

Meanwhile Abbey Straw sees a meteorite strike in the islands off the coast of Maine.  She drags her best friend off to find the meteorite, fights off a would-be rapist, sinks her father’s lobster boat but finds only a smooth hole, no meteorite.  Wyman connects with Abbey and they start looking for the source of the meteor that stuck Maine, passed through the earth and exited in Cambodia.

The science fiction aspect adds drama and existential threat to the story.

Preston gives us interesting people that we come to care about.  Abby is young, impetuous, brave, foolish and very smart.  She loves her father although she has the usual push/pull to get away from home.  She loves her friend Jackie despite knowing Jackie is a bit dim and never going to make anything of herself.  Wyman Ford is complex, smart, brave, patriotic and not at all intimidated by power.

Overall Impact is good, with well-done people interacting within a complex plot.  True, some of the events resolve themselves a little too neatly, but that’s the nature of thrillers and space opera.

4 Stars

 

Duty Honor Planet – Intriguing Twist on Interstellar Invasion

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Duty, Honor, Planet is the first novel in the 3-book series by Rick Partlow and takes a different twist on the alien invasion theme and is a pretty entertaining read.  Officers Jason McKay and Shannon Stark are assigned to the new Intelligence arm of the Republic space navy, with the intention to form a special forces unit.  Their first assignment is not glamorous, to guard a high profile Senator’s daughter on a tour of various colony hot spots.

They run into some very odd alien invaders:    Blue, large humanoids who are looting the colony planet of all its resources.  Oddly, the humanoids have human DNA and appear to be sub-sentient creatures created soldiers.  The attack on the colony doesn’t make much sense – until McKay figures out that the attack is likely a dry run for an invasion of Earth.  Further, they determine the attackers are from a Russian force rumored to have survived the last war and escaped somewhere.

The rest of the novel proceeds much as we expect with plenty of action and good dialogue and even reasonable character development.  The characters never quite come alive for me, but it’s close.  There is romance which is also a near miss; our main character sleeps with two ladies and has intense relationships with both – within a day of each other.

Overall this is well-written and well-edited.  Pacing is good and the author doesn’t skimp on creating interesting settings and conversational dialogue.  I’m not sure I’ll read the sequels.

3 Stars

Trust A Few: Haruspex Trilogy: Part One by E.M. Swift-Hook Space Opera

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Trust A Few: Haruspex Trilogy: Part One by E.M. Swift-Hook is a good book, with well-drawn characters, action and plenty of moral dilemmas.  So why did I keep leaving it to play a game on my tablet?  I’m not sure, but the story became less compelling about two thirds of the way through.  It may have been me or maybe it was the fact that all the characters enmeshed themselves in the criminal underworld – not appealing – or that the true villain in the story appeared only a few times.

We have four main characters with a few others adding conflicts and challenges.  Durban Chola sees Jaz as little more than a thug, a hard mercenary, a man who survived the worst military setting imaginable, but I see Jaz as the central character, the glue that holds everyone together.  Jaz would say Avilon is the keystone, and the action revolves around Avilon, but it is Jaz who has the most complex character and is the engine.  I kept hoping Jaz would find a way back to Vel’s cousin and her little girl, the two people he planned to make his permanent family until Durban yanked him away.

The setting is the underworld of an enormous city, in a world ruled by the Coalition and its CSF security forces.  We know from the beginning that the security force wants something from Avilon but we haven’t seen what it is yet.

In fact it isn’t at all clear why the group doesn’t just leave.  Jaz claims to be working on setting himself up to do just that, and Avilon will stay as long as Jaz, but it’s hard to believe they are both willing to kill people and do other evil just to build a stash.  Durban will stay close to Avilon, but Charity has little reason to do so.

Trust A Few is hard to rate.  I liked it enough to finish, but it did bog down for me and I’m not likely to seek out the sequels because I don’t care enough about any of the characters to see how they play out.

3 Stars

Vesta Exiled: Vesta Colony Book One by Sterling R. Walker – Science Fiction

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Vesta Exiled: Vesta Colony Book One by Sterling R. Walker takes us to the space colony Vesta, where some of the third and now their children display new mental talents.  The people affected, called Strays, had their DNA modified when treated as infants for a deadly plague.

Earth cut off the colony when they reported the plague, and now the 12,000 or so people on Vesta must develop their own way to survive and thrive in a world with threatening animals and incredible storms.  We would expect the colony would value people who communicate telepathically now that the communication devices have worn out, but such is not the case.  Some fear or despise the Strays, and the leader of this faction decides it’s time to intern all Strays in a separate prison.

This is the backdrop for the human story of five young adults, 4 Strays and 1 Normal, who find out about the plot and decide to fight back.  The novel is pleasantly matter-of-fact about the reaction of most Normals:  Most think it wrong or silly to intern the Strays but enough go along with it that the corrupt mayor is able to imprison almost everyone.  The Strays themselves cooperate after the mayor shoots one Stray with Downs Syndrome.

Sterling Walker gives us a story about people, with enough detail in the setting that we can appreciate the struggle the colony has now and will have even more in the future.  The colony is at a crisis point and I can foresee three broad paths:  1)  Treat the Strays as low caste workers, slaves, 2) Abandon the segregation effort and live together as they have until now or 3) Strays leave and form their own community which would eventually conflict with the rest.

Walker tells the story through the five young adults, yet I wouldn’t consider this a YA novel.  The author fleshes out events and people are realistic about feelings and each other and the romance is understated.  Overall Vesta Exiled is an excellent story, well presented with engaging characters and realistic conflicts.

Vesta Exiled ends on a cliffhanger.

4 Stars

The Stars Now Unclaimed by Drew Williams – Space Opera or One Fight Scene Too Many

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Publisher Tor graciously provided a review copy through NetGalley for The Stars Now Unclaimed by new author Drew Williams.  The book blurb describes it as space opera with a strong female lead, Jane.

The novel has potential as Williams creates a far future galaxy devastated first by endless war among tens of thousands of sects comprised of 17 space-faring races including humans, followed by the Pulse, radiation that reduced most planets to pre-technological levels.  The Pulse effects were random, leaving some worlds almost untouched, others back to steam and others back to horse, spears and clubs.  This backdrop has excellent story potential but it needs strong characters to engross us readers.

Williams brings us Jane, the narrator (we don’t learn her name until about 80% through), who works for the Justified, the group who created the Pulse and now seeks to minimize its damage the next time it flows through.  Jane is responsible to collect kids with unique mental talents but her primary skill is fighting.

That brings us to the problem.  The novel is one fight scene after another, with very little time for character development and not much setting.  It is as though the author creates this great world, then figures it is good enough and we can fill in the blanks.

Even though Jane is in the entire novel we don’t really get to know her other than she likes to fight and she is a tenacious friend and worse enemy.  The other characters also have little personality and we see them primarily as foils for Jane.  The character with the most personality is her ship, Scheherazade.

Jane and friends swear a lot, mostly F-bombs as general purpose filler words, but there is no blasphemy.

Overall The Stars Now Unclaimed is a decent read.  I couldn’t get too involved with it given the lack of full-bodied people, but the author writes reasonably well and has created a complex world.  I wish him well in future novels in this series, although I’m not likely to seek the next books.

3 Stars

The Alien Diaries by Glenn Devlin – The Revolutionary War, Aliens, Modern Suspense

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The Alien Diaries takes a refreshingly different look at alien contact with a story that jumps seamlessly from today back to 1781, during the tail end of the Revolutionary War in Virginia.  Asher hires widower bookseller Colin to catalog the collection in the Dibble estate that date back to the late 1700s, and sends him a couple first editions and a few pages of a diary to whet his appetite for the work.  Colin realizes the assignment is odd – for one thing Asher paid off the mortgages on his home and business as a gift – but does not realize exactly how odd, or how dangerous.

Asher insists that Colin and his nominal supervisor Maddy wear 18th century clothing at all times and hide any evidence of modern equipment.  They are both intrigued by the anomalies on the estate:  Running water, electric lights, rudimentary air conditioning and central heating, indoor plumbing, refrigeration, but Maddy acts the hard-nosed supervisor and forbids from exploring and investigating until he finishes cataloging the book collection.

The diary from Kate Dibble, Mary and Dibble’s adopted daughter, gives the framework for the 1781 story.  An enslaved alien sought refuge with the Dibbles, his owners hunted him down.  Now, in 2018, the owners have returned and still hunt their escapee.  Colin and Maddy face terrifying events; they are unable to leave the estate and no one can see or hear them.

Good Points

Plot is intriguing, unusual and the story is self-contained, with a beginning, middle and solid end.

Characters are well done, especially those from 1781.  The modern pair of are somewhat less developed but we see enough to like.  We suspect the two will end up together but the romance is secondary.

Author Glenn Devlin does an excellent job moving between times.  We are not confused as to which group we are with and the events of the past clearly define the events today.

So-So Points

There are plot holes.  Couple examples:

  • How does James communicate with the aliens in our modern time to arrange the 2018 events?
  • Why have the winged aliens not attacked Earth?  We would be pushovers and clearly they have known about us for at least 2500 years.

There are editing problems, missing words, so on.  Also, does not anyone use the irregular past tense anymore for shine/shone or dive/dove?

The biggest problem with the novel is it bogs down about the 40% mark.  I kept reading because I was curious what was going on with the mysterious Dibbles, but the book itself crept along.  There is a comment on Amazon that Alien Diaries “was a finalist during Amazon’s monthly screenwriting competition” so perhaps what felt like doldrums in a novel would be more lively in a movie.

Overall

I liked the novel and read to the end and appreciated the skill with which author Devlin mixed the 1780s into 2018.  It’s not quite 4 stars, perhaps 3 1/2.

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